Far Distance

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tentatively glistening in the frigid sky winter stars o so distant my call gone unheard tears morphed crystallized AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on November 5, 2021

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/10/2021 3:24:00 PM

O, that the universe would at least sympathize with our loneliness... ~ Gershon

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2021 8:06:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and comment, Gershon ~

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 11/7/2021 4:15:00 PM

Winter sky and stars making their debut... very nice Line...Delice

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/8/2021 5:10:00 AM

Thank you, Delice ~ much appreciated

Mike Gentile

Date: 11/7/2021 5:00:00 AM

Line, I love the images this created for me! I really enjoyed it! Happy Sunday xxoo

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/7/2021 5:23:00 AM

Thank you very much, Mike ~

Ricky Muse

Date: 11/6/2021 8:04:00 AM

I love the way this poem let's the reader fill in the blanks. A call for peace, equality, love. When these pleas go unheard they can lead to sorrow. Sounds very much like the world we live in today. Thanks for sharing................peace!

Line Gauthier
Date: 11/6/2021 11:43:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Ricky ~