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Far Distance

tentatively glistening
in the frigid sky
winter stars
o so distant
my call gone unheard
tears morphed
crystallized



AP: Honorable Mention 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Wolf Avatar
November 10, 2021 at 3:24 PM
O, that the universe would at least sympathize with our loneliness... ~ Gershon
Gauthier Avatar
November 11, 2021 at 8:06 AM
Thanks for your visit and comment, Gershon ~
Skelly Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 4:15 PM
Winter sky and stars making their debut... very nice Line...Delice
Gauthier Avatar
November 8, 2021 at 5:10 AM
Thank you, Delice ~ much appreciated
Gentile Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 5:00 AM
Line, I love the images this created for me! I really enjoyed it! Happy Sunday xxoo
Gauthier Avatar
November 7, 2021 at 5:23 AM
Thank you very much, Mike ~
Evans Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 8:04 AM
I love the way this poem let's the reader fill in the blanks. A call for peace, equality, love. When these pleas go unheard they can lead to sorrow. Sounds very much like the world we live in today. Thanks for sharing................peace!
Gauthier Avatar
November 6, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Ricky ~
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