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Far Away

When life throws shades of gray 
and darkness hides the day...
When rain seems to make me oh, not gay
for it wilts my blooms to decay~
When wild winds blow my gateway
and take all my darling buds away...
I bow my head and pray
and look up to my star far away~
So very far but never fades away.

Yes, it never fades away
for it is brighter than Sirius 
and more beautiful than Betelgeuse
as it never ceases to shine even at day.

Troubles may come along the byway~
but I will not go astray
for at the end of my everyday
I am still proud to say~
amongst a million stars light-years away 
there is that star that bears my name
and shines only for me.

But, oh, today as I begin my way~
midst autumn auburn trees,
I see a star carved in the bark of a tree
with my name embossed on it.
I look up to the sky but I don't see my star.

In wonder, I cast a passing glance 
at the golden morn that surrounds me;
As shining rays descend like gossamer of starlights,
the shy birds begin to sing in unison
with dancing trees that hum a tune~
there I see you illuminating in sunlight 
holding a necklace with a star pendant 
and I see my glittering name on it.

Now, as you come closer to me
and hang that jewel on my neck
I close my eyes ~ galaxies in silence hail!
as you take me back to your constellation.





November 11, 2020

There is a star with my name on it
Contest Judged:  11/12/2020 8:33:00 AM
Sponsored by: Silent One
2nd place

Entered for " All Yours ( April 9) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Brian Strand

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Date: 4/10/2021 3:26:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Date: 11/18/2020 6:12:00 AM
JCB, your poem is beautifully penned, the rhyming parts are wonderful and congrats on your win in the contest with this beauty _Constance
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Date: 11/13/2020 6:44:00 PM
wow, this is very profound and so creative. One of my favorites I think I read on this winner list. Congrats!
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Date: 11/12/2020 6:40:00 PM
JCB, I was swept up in your poem's endearing beauty and enchantment. Your last stellar stanza, so full of expression, is a grand finale to an exquisite piece. Your gifted pen shines, as does your guiding star, my dear friend. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Silent One's contest.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/12/2020 8:57:00 AM
Great spirit.. one that hopefully everyone can adopt.. Congratulations on your placement..
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Date: 11/10/2020 6:46:00 PM
This is enchanting, Dear JCB. Love every word, every line - so imaginative and passionate! Hugs, Mala
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Date: 11/10/2020 3:18:00 PM
Awe, this is very lovely, JCB. I enjoyed the read :)
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