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Fantasy Land

On the dark side of town the Ogre lives His only friend is the refection he sees On pondering on his shade of green He boomed out a hearty groan indeed Tired of being a lonely soul He thought up imaginary elves and trolls ‘Too tiny for me to see’ he moaned ‘I might squish their tiny bones’ So who could be his ideal mate? Maybe a banshee? Could this be fate? Certainly not, he thought. The hour late Her screams and shrills would make me quake In the crooked mansion down the street Lived a vampire with smart clean teeth It was rumoured that he had turned a new leaf He now drank fine wines not blooded meat So the gigantic ogre rang the bell A smartly dressed enchanted friend Offered the ogre an ear to lend They now share tales till eternities end By Emma Buckeridge For contest : Fantasy Land 7th place win

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/11/2011 12:03:00 PM
i really love this poem, ogres and trolls and still a fun ending.
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Date: 5/5/2011 12:53:00 PM
Like stories about mythic characters. I have belonged to the american Tolkien society for many years. My late father(Whom I miss terribly) was a fine pianist. I play once in a while on an electric keyboard I own. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/4/2011 1:59:00 PM
Many congratulations on your win, Emma : )
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Date: 5/4/2011 12:19:00 PM
Congratulations Emma on your win in Debbie's contest "Fantasy Land". Love, Carol
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Date: 5/4/2011 10:14:00 AM
Congratulations on the seventh place win in the contest, Emma
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Date: 5/4/2011 5:22:00 AM
Good day, Emma. Enjoyed this shady tale with its fun ending!:) A very clever write, Emma. Wishing you and yours the best! (thank you for your gracious comment) Mikki
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Date: 5/4/2011 5:00:00 AM
Another fine imaginative tale to smile through. I enjoyed it Emma. Congratulations to you
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Date: 5/3/2011 9:56:00 PM
another great hit for you, emma... fine cheers for the happy win! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 5/3/2011 5:43:00 PM
A fun story. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/3/2011 2:10:00 PM
ahhh, what a sweet tale of an ogre and a vampire.Lovely!
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Date: 5/2/2011 7:45:00 AM
Great fairy tale poem! Hope you have a nice Halloween! Peace & blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 5/1/2011 11:35:00 AM
I like the use of the fairytale monsters in this. How cute !! Enjoyed the read !!
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Date: 5/1/2011 5:55:00 AM
What a creative picture you painted with apt wording - a wonderful entry to the contest, Emma
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Date: 4/30/2011 1:00:00 PM
Wonderful poem Emma, good uck in the contest....:)
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Date: 4/30/2011 9:24:00 AM
Emma you have a very good creative piece of poetry here, good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/30/2011 6:49:00 AM
Cute, Emma. This is good contest material. I wish you well in the contest. ^__^
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