Notes About The Poem

a very old poem of mine now written as lyrics to a song for Mark Springer's "A trip I'm glad I took" Poetry Contest

Fantasy Cruise

Chorus:
All aboard the Fantasy M/S of Carnival
for half a week’s vacation time of fun and falderal.
Hear greetings from your captain, his director and the crew.
Ready, set, get going.  The Bahamas wait for you.

Bon Voyage! There’s Reggae music playing on the Lido.
Dinner is at 6 or 8. Hold off on that tuxedo!
You could eat a pizza by the Windows On the Sea
or go beneath to dine on shrimp and meet the maitre d’.
Gamble or see comedy; reflect upon the ocean.
Late to bed; relax your head; sense the soothing motion.
Rise and shine in Freeport where the ship will dock all day.
You can disembark to take a tour, or you can stay
on board the ship, swim or dance or join in funny things
like contests for the men with hairy chests or knobby knees.

Chorus:
All aboard the Fantasy M/S of Carnival
for half a week’s vacation time of fun and falderal.
Hear greetings from your captain, his director and the crew.
Ready, set, get going.  The Bahamas wait for you.

Day two when you waken, you will be in Nassau.
There’s stuff  for everyone, from your kiddies to your grandma!
If you like adventure, visit lovely Blue Lagoon.
For snorkeling with sting rays,  the boat leaves right at noon.
You can pet some dolphins, but extra you should pay
if you want to swim with them. That’s one special day.
In town you might be nabbed by a plaza beautician.
Getting braids is all the rage, so people get their hair done.
Get back to the gangway before the ship sets sail.
If you‘re still not having fun, you must be a door nail!

Chorus:
All aboard the Fantasy M/S of Carnival
for half a week’s vacation time of fun and falderal.
Hear greetings from your captain, his director and the crew.
Ready, set, get going.  The Bahamas wait for you.

“Day at Sea” arrives as your trip is winding down,
And the biggest night is coming; women wear a gown!
That final evening dining perhaps with a new friend,
you’ll wish instead of ending, it were starting all again.
Gals and guys with braided scalps; everyone looks nice.
Ah, that midnight feast with pretty sculptures carved in ice.
The ultimate for leisure if you’re after more than snoozing’.
In the laid-back natives lingo: “Mon, you best be cruising!”

Chorus:
All aboard the Fantasy M/S of Carnival
for half a week’s vacation time of fun and falderal.
Hear greetings from your captain, his director and the crew.
Ready, set, get going.  The Bahamas wait for you.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
July 12, 2026 at 9:45 PM
Cruising is such fun. A few months back, we had a four days cruise. Posh facilities and sumptuous food with music and dance. I can make out- you had a wonderful time. Great entry with nice lyrics. All the best.
Crandall Avatar
July 9, 2026 at 9:34 AM
Sounds like a great cruise! Reggae music i a tropical environment. I've actually never been on a cruise - I'm sure I'd get seasick - lol.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 4:03 PM
so upbeat...you brought the cruise experience to life.
Rolland Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 7:37 AM
just extraordinary, should love so much a cruise in Bahamas, your poem fascinates me, makes me dream, so well inspiring, thanks poet Andrea
DiMino Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 3:56 AM
I've never been on a cruise -- sounds like great fun! You bring the experience vividly to life for me. Well done.
Buhagiar Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 2:11 AM
You break my heart. We have so many cruises in Malta, but with my diabetes and a departed wife, I am not inclined to travel.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 2:58 AM
Because of my neurological issues, I don't travel now. It wouldn't be half as fun. So I break my own heart too!
Poet Avatar
July 8, 2026 at 1:25 AM
Cruising is a blast; I've been there several times and can't wait to return. Andrea, your rhymes were spot on, and I hope you win the contest.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 10:47 PM
Nice cruise wish I had come too, sounds like a great time.
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 11:20 PM
It was so fun!
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 4:32 PM
I am delighted you went, had a great time and probably would go again. This one reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Way to go. Sara K.
Allison Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 12:43 PM
cruising is such fun and we have booked another two for next year - loved the lyrics Andrea, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
July 7, 2026 at 12:45 PM
Thanks, Jan. This was my only one and it was way back in 2000 so I am glad I wrote down all the things we did! Best vaycay ever
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