Fantasy

Consonant to your mesmerising charm,
I camouflage all declamatories,
Unavowed in step with the times,
End up at a secluded place.

Swindler you were, failure of my judgement,
You detriment my feelings, corrode my interior,
Eclipsed my radiance, walked over my prejudice,
I writhed in pain, blanked out.

Frozen and exhausted, woke up to horror of dark,
Epinephrine stays, reconciliate with the shock,
Triumphed with your warmth,I calm down.
A fantasy , a fictive chiller- never to treasure!!







Written on 6/7/13
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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November 18, 2013 at 6:47 PM
Dr Upma, . ;) Congratulation, on your winning fantasy poem... Sending Smiles. *LINDA*
Mehta Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 12:28 AM
Congratulations on the fine win, Dr Upma
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November 17, 2013 at 11:42 PM
great story and meter.. you do this well, dr. urma...big congrats to you..:) huggs
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