Fantasy

The mad man sees fantasy. With the spirit confined In the world combined And the soul entwined By the evil of mankind for Brians contest

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/1/2010 12:35:00 PM

I enjoyed this one very much Cecil. So glad it won. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie

Robb A. Kopp

Date: 1/20/2010 4:13:00 PM

Beautiful expression

Brandee Augustus

Date: 1/20/2010 2:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Brian's Rhyme Time contest!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2010 1:25:00 PM

An interesting one, Cecil! Congratulations. Andrea

Audrey Haick

Date: 1/19/2010 4:11:00 PM

Dear Cecil, Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Rhyme Time" Contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey

Joyce Johnson

Date: 1/19/2010 11:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your imaginative writing and winn. Love, Joyce

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/18/2010 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on this winning entry, Cecil!! Well done! ~ Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 1/18/2010 5:52:00 AM

Congratulations Cecil!

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/18/2010 4:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's “Rhyme Time” contest with this wonderful Fantasy eap poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Smiles, DAS-J

Margaret Foster

Date: 1/17/2010 5:48:00 PM

congratulations Cecil, well written....Margaret

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/17/2010 1:13:00 PM

Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. well written and just luv your title too... luv.. Linda-Marie..

Date: 1/17/2010 10:58:00 AM

Interesting perspective to give the reader something to think about. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/17/2010 9:36:00 AM

Very nice poem, Cecil, and deserving of the honor it received in Brian's contest. Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 1/17/2010 9:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Cecil with this masterful eap. Lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 1/17/2010 8:55:00 AM

Congrats on your success in my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian .My latest contest POETRY OF THE NOUN is now open.

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 1/13/2010 10:57:00 AM

Great list poem, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/13/2010 9:49:00 AM

Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in this perspective on madness, Cecil. We resort to fantasy when the world gets too hot to handle. Excellent list poem! Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/13/2010 7:11:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poetry today Cecil. Wishing you the best in the contest. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol

Judy Riley

Date: 1/13/2010 12:00:00 AM

I guess this would work as a "List" poem, I was not familiar with that style so I looked it up, thanks for showing a new type. The meaning of your poem is very thought provolking. Judy Riley

Brian Strand

Date: 1/12/2010 11:57:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian