Fantasy

The mad man sees fantasy.
With the spirit confined
In the world combined
And the soul entwined
By the evil of mankind




for Brians contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Marcum Wong Avatar
February 1, 2010 at 12:35 PM
I enjoyed this one very much Cecil. So glad it won. Congratulations. Blessings, Connie
Kopp Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 4:13 PM
Beautiful expression
Augustus Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 2:10 PM
Congratulations on your win Brian's Rhyme Time contest!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2010 at 1:25 PM
An interesting one, Cecil! Congratulations. Andrea
Haick Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 4:11 PM
Dear Cecil, Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Rhyme Time" Contest! Great job! Peace, Audrey
Johnson Avatar
January 19, 2010 at 11:56 AM
Congratulations on your imaginative writing and winn. Love, Joyce
Richards Avatar
January 18, 2010 at 7:43 AM
Congratulations on this winning entry, Cecil!! Well done! ~ Carrie
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January 18, 2010 at 5:52 AM
Congratulations Cecil!
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January 18, 2010 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Brian Strand's “Rhyme Time” contest with this wonderful Fantasy eap poem. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your poetic light is bright. Smiles, DAS-J
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January 17, 2010 at 5:48 PM
congratulations Cecil, well written....Margaret
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January 17, 2010 at 1:13 PM
Congrats Cecil on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. well written and just luv your title too... luv.. Linda-Marie..
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January 17, 2010 at 10:58 AM
Interesting perspective to give the reader something to think about. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing. Karen
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January 17, 2010 at 9:36 AM
Very nice poem, Cecil, and deserving of the honor it received in Brian's contest. Congratulations, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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January 17, 2010 at 9:16 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest, Cecil with this masterful eap. Lainie
Strand Avatar
January 17, 2010 at 8:55 AM
Congrats on your success in my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian .My latest contest POETRY OF THE NOUN is now open.
Muzzey Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 10:57 AM
Great list poem, I enjoyed the read. Good luck in the contest. Caryl
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January 13, 2010 at 9:49 AM
Unfortunately, there is a lot of truth in this perspective on madness, Cecil. We resort to fantasy when the world gets too hot to handle. Excellent list poem! Good luck in Brian's contest. Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
January 13, 2010 at 7:11 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Cecil. Wishing you the best in the contest. Please continue to share your writing with us. I wish you the best with life and your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I guess this would work as a "List" poem, I was not familiar with that style so I looked it up, thanks for showing a new type. The meaning of your poem is very thought provolking. Judy Riley
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January 12, 2010 at 11:57 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest Cecil.Rgds Brian
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