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Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 7 8 9 7 0 8 8 9 7 Eve Roper's contest, beautiful painting of sunflower with fairy and dragonfly. Rhyme scheme: ABAB CACA https://www.poetrysoup.com/images/bio_images/177736/photos/ps_eve_roper_fantasy-1305.jpg

Fantasy




In my fantasies I dream
of a world where all have merit. 
Not judging on what outward may seem,
but what's inside, compare it...

...to what is valued most of all, 
kindness, love, and being a team.
Why then, all friends, we answer the call!
Like sunflower to sunbeam.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Crandall Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 1:41 PM
That's a nice fantasy that can come true!
Woods Avatar
December 15, 2024 at 10:07 AM
Yea! Ty for stopping by! Xo
Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 4:58 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
Woods Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Ty Sara! Xoxo
Andresen Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 4:07 AM
- Great poem for Eve's painting :) - Congratulations on your win, Crystol :) - hugs
Woods Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Hugs rbay! Ty for stopping in! Xo
Goldsmith Avatar
December 12, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/wonderful write. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
Woods Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:01 AM
Ty and to you! Xo
George Avatar
December 10, 2024 at 8:05 PM
You have created a highly philosophical poem, far from fantasy! Let love and compassion fill hearts and let us learn to merit people beyond their external appearance! Have a great week ahead, dear Crystol.
Woods Avatar
December 13, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Tysm! You as well! Xo
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