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Eve Roper's contest, beautiful painting of sunflower with fairy and dragonfly.
Rhyme scheme: ABAB CACA
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Fantasy
In my fantasies I dream
of a world where all have merit.
Not judging on what outward may seem,
but what's inside, compare it...
...to what is valued most of all,
kindness, love, and being a team.
Why then, all friends, we answer the call!
Like sunflower to sunbeam.
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