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Poem Syllable Counter Results Syllables Per Line: 7 8 9 7 0 8 8 9 7 Eve Roper's contest, beautiful painting of sunflower with fairy and dragonfly. Rhyme scheme: ABAB CACA https://www.poetrysoup.com/images/bio_images/177736/photos/ps_eve_roper_fantasy-1305.jpg
In my fantasies I dream of a world where all have merit. Not judging on what outward may seem, but what's inside, compare it... ...to what is valued most of all, kindness, love, and being a team. Why then, all friends, we answer the call! Like sunflower to sunbeam.

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Date: 12/13/2024 1:41:00 PM
That's a nice fantasy that can come true!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/15/2024 10:07:00 AM
Yea! Ty for stopping by! Xo
Date: 12/13/2024 4:58:00 AM
Ahhh!!! Nice fairy tale that is on the winners' list. Way to go. Congratulations on your win. Sara K
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/13/2024 11:01:00 AM
Ty Sara! Xoxo
Date: 12/13/2024 4:07:00 AM
- Great poem for Eve's painting :) - Congratulations on your win, Crystol :) - hugs
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/13/2024 11:01:00 AM
Hugs rbay! Ty for stopping in! Xo
Date: 12/12/2024 9:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely/wonderful write. Have a wonderful day writing away..............
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/13/2024 11:01:00 AM
Ty and to you! Xo
Date: 12/10/2024 8:05:00 PM
You have created a highly philosophical poem, far from fantasy! Let love and compassion fill hearts and let us learn to merit people beyond their external appearance! Have a great week ahead, dear Crystol.
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/13/2024 11:00:00 AM
Tysm! You as well! Xo
Date: 12/7/2024 3:32:00 PM
I believe such a world is no fantasy at all, but a soon to be reality - Matthew 5:5. Have a great weekend!
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Crystol Woods
Date: 12/10/2024 11:16:00 AM
Amen! Xo

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