Fantastic Journey

It was a quaint little shop
Looking strangely out of place
And the owner was a hermit
With a crinkled young old face.

He was a man of distinction
Of health hearty and hale,
Had looked a Haggis in the 
Eye and lived to tell the tale.
He had lived with a mermaid
Having found her in distress
Nursed her back to health 
To become his new mistress.
He had sailed the seven seas,
Served with a Samurai band,
Been a leading Ronin before
Sailing away for Samarkand

He had awoken the Kraken
Then, before it was too late
Quietly swum away to avoid
A somewhat gruesome fate.
He had hunted with Vampires
But only on those darkest nights
For they'd had to be recoffined
Before any sign of daylight.
The werewolves of Carpathia
Had taught him transfiguration
A secret he'd long discarded
Once he'd left that roving nation.

Bareback ridden a unicorn
Learned all its Pan Pipe skill;
Sometimes early on cold dark 
Mornings he would play it still.
He didn't believe in Faeries.
Didn't like to fantasise,
Only believed in those things
He'd seen with his naked eyes.
I left him making a Herbal tea
Said I didn't quite know when
But the very next time I passed 
I'd pop in and see him again.

I shouted my goodbyes
As he worked away inside
And I eagerly continued on
My Magic Carpet ride.

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Date: 12/14/2022 10:24:00 PM
I am out of breath just reading that Terry, The rhythm of that poem was fast pace and constructed by an insanely creative imaginative poet! Wonderful Poem, goes straight to my favourtes list.
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Terry Ireland
Date: 12/15/2022 9:51:00 AM
Thanks Wen - any time you want to borrowmy carpet .....;-)
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