Fantastic Flight - Chapter 1 - Passionate, Frozen Desires

(V. 1) I’m so irresponsible, 
But you’re gorgeous and irreplaceable 
I don’t know how to let go 
I don’t know where to go…
I shouldn’t leave behind my past totally
I don’t know how to let go of things 
The pains of the past hunts me down again
I’m on my own and I’m sore to the core 
I implore you to let go of me! Let go of me!
Let go of me now!! Set me free from bondage and captivity!
Feelin’ like I need a slap in the face literally!

*chorus*

The mountain winds are howling its stormy resentment
The snow glitters on the triumphant mountains…
I’ve tried to conceal these feelings of discontent
My eyes are spraying with tears of sorrow – weep no more, sad fountains
Don’t push me to the limits – I breathe in and out
I let go of my anxiety and trade it with prosperity– 
I’m one with the passionate, frozen desires in my heart 
I’m strong like Sampson in the bible – 
Let the light of day unfreeze my heart’s agony and avarice
I don’t want to believe in those silly allegories…
Am I your living sacrifice?
My heart is as cold as ice…I need to take His advice!
I have faced reality alone before
Is this real or is this a myth? There’s more land to explore!

(V. 2) Dealin’ with a scatterbrained boy’s a job,
It’s like running a different race or realizing you’ve failed from the start 
Not one took heart – I won’t let my eyes sob
I’ve painted you a dwelling place where you and I can escape 
We can both escape from the worries of this world of woe,
Sinking in its self-indulgent greed and rolling in its death cart 
Not one desired true love in his or her heart – 
The abyss and the ebony skies clothed them all with one despondent cape
Hand me the duct tape! 
Hand me the super glue! 
I'll repair you...for you make me feel complete
Like my passionate, frozen desires...now, I can stand on both feet
I'll remain discreet until you rescue me and kiss me
I'll remain trapped in callous night...if you'll embrace me with glorious glee ! ! ! 
Let me fix you with my passionate, frozen miracles! I won’t push you out of shape!
Surprises are at every corner and every angle – you’ll see me gape! 
I’m tired of feeling blue, knowing you for so long 
Like a familiar, touching tune of a song

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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