Fantasies, Visions, and Reality

cold night
fire hot passion
like a cresendo of an orchesta 
a climax rises and 
screams shake the walls
teeth tickle 
my throat
fingers caress 
every inch of my skin
bare and clothed
sweat-a thin sheen-covers me
like a blanket as 
i am stabbed 
down below 
with something pleasureable
thrusting
hips bucking 
screaming 
screeching
my nails digging into his back 
could this be real? 
feels like it...
seems like it....

my alarm goes off
warm light slaps my face
like ice water
instantly waking me 
from pleasurable slumber

in the day 
i dream 
visions dance in my sight 
in my mind 
drinking my sanity and 
turning it milky and 
creamy 
i smile at the fantasy 
the passion that
drips from it....
from such fantasies....

soon i feel the throbbing between
i feel the wet warmth 
i feel the thrusting
i feel....
pleasure, sore pleasure....

wonderful pleasure...
then claws run down my leg
i scream when i see 
a cat run away and 
my leg now bleeds

my visions and fantasies ruined
for the day, 
but saved for the night
saved for when me and my dream
share the same sights.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 6/30/2011 7:39:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Princess. I will be back again soon to read more. Hoping you find your soul filled with inspiration today and everyday and may your writing endeavors come to be. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:31:00 PM
wow I am going to take a cold shower now, thank you very much, great pen
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Date: 6/29/2011 10:34:00 PM
You are welcome! And good luck with that shower :p hahaha when my mind is in some sort of gutter some where i have to write down what it picks up...hahahaha thanks for the comment!
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