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"fantasies and Obsessions"

Intolerable inexperience instilled in indifference, Suddenly shifting. Such subtle shame, For fallen fantasies, failing fictional fallacies. Every exception exceeding expectancies, Never neglecting notable necessities. Coming completely closed, Removing reality, reflecting rational reduction. Perfect possibilities pass presently, Abandoning avarice and addiction, When we waver with weakness. Our options, overt obsessions, Dampen dreams, destroy desires, Verify vendettas, vilify victories. We will willingly wait, Rise, reach, regrow.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/5/2010 3:46:00 PM
Brought a tear to my eye. I love this one! Keep up the good work!
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Date: 9/4/2010 7:40:00 AM
so clever!
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Date: 9/3/2010 6:51:00 AM
Very creative, and very well done.. I love that last line, Rise, reach, regrow~~
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Date: 9/2/2010 7:46:00 PM
Nice alliteration. I got one for you to check if you'd like. It's a fun style!
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:25:00 PM
The rhythm of the consonants are like sweet drops of rain ... impressive. Welcome to poetrysoup, and drop by sometimes. Friends need to know and share
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Date: 9/2/2010 11:43:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your most creative write tonight.. soup has many contests posted..check them out and enter..and good luck..with luv..
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Date: 9/2/2010 10:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Evan. I will not be reading poetry for a few days as I will be gone from Friday until Monday. I look forward to reading more of your poetry when I return. I wish you a weekend filled with good health, love, and loads of inspiration. Love and Blessings, Carol
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