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I've been willing to write something erotic but I also wanted to create a balance between erotica and avoiding a too obscene poetic picture. This is my second erotic poem which I believe is also not too obscene (just like my first). So I believe anyone, everyone is free to enjoy it... Criticisms are as well welcomed. Thanks

her multiple attractive sites leave him confuse and indecisive her soft abdomen, hollows down from a simple caress and her excited twin sisters, resonate on her burst from an interplay below the waist. Oh! the luscious melons of her backyard tender and mesmerizing; unique and enslaving make him appreciate her on top Squeezing all flesh she possesses brings out scary energy which manifests with the passion of immortals burning both in erotic flames and sparks of voracious instincts. Her groans, bathe with her own sweat with pinned hands, to the surrender of his intense survey making hormones go swift like dynamic lieutenants as the artifact of love builds in an incredible speed. He slides down from lips to hips with deliberate pauses on strategic stops as the gear of his kisses increases with no manual control. Staying under the shade of her underwear shielded by the smooth pillars of her thighs processes the raw of their love. Now the time is right, the moment is calling and finally, the gate to the promised land he enters with a welcome so magical and immeasurable.

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Date: 4/14/2015 4:42:00 PM
“ Fantasia Erotica, ” surpasses any, of the many, I have put forth. I am impressed that you have accomplished so much in just eleven months !!!, keep up the good work !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )
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Funom Makama
Date: 4/17/2015 11:37:00 AM
thanks William J. I really appreciate your words.. I've been a souper since 2011 though
Date: 12/1/2014 12:30:00 PM
You are very corageous indeed to express erotism in such an open way. I could never do so: your poetry is very effective and full of fantasy!
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Funom Makama
Date: 12/3/2014 9:26:00 AM
Oh Lord my God! I am totally speechless to your words... Thank you a zillion for the encouragement
Date: 10/10/2014 4:54:00 AM
EROTIC!!!!! Lovely write Funom, loved the imagery....
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/28/2014 7:30:00 AM
I'm happy you loved it. Thanks a lot for your comments
Date: 10/1/2014 3:45:00 PM
Sensual and erotic verse here which is quite moving. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Funom Makama
Date: 10/28/2014 7:35:00 AM
Thank you so much Matthew Anish
Date: 9/25/2014 8:43:00 AM
This piece has made me smile my friend, tastey and tastefully erotic.
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 8:03:00 AM
Oh.. I'm glad you loved it my friend.
Date: 9/24/2014 12:33:00 AM
that is first time I heard of the melons in the back yard vs. the front, and then I realized what you meant! A very sensual poem! WEll done.
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 8:01:00 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea... That just came into my mind and then I penned it down. I had wanted to attribute that line to the ones in front but then, I thought "A resonating twin sisters on the burst" will be better fitted for them.
Date: 9/23/2014 2:49:00 PM
Hey Funom, Great eroticism, without the porn. "Luscious melons of her back yard" Such expressionism. I work in Nigeria and am all to familiar with the imagery that seems to be here.. (well it is for me :) ) Keep it up... if you will pardon the pun :) All the Best Thomas
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 7:59:00 AM
Wow! Thats great... I forgot about this! I can remember you said so in your comment on my poem "Africa"... I am happy you not only like it but also are familiar with the imagery.
Date: 9/23/2014 12:13:00 PM
A grand prelude to making love. rich in highly erotic , charged metaphors. A good erotic poem. Love Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 7:56:00 AM
Thanks a lot Rajat for your incredible comment. I really appreciate it,.
Date: 9/23/2014 12:12:00 PM
Promised land? Okay lol. Enjoyed!
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 7:52:00 AM
lol... Now I feel so embarrassed. All the same I am glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 9/23/2014 12:11:00 PM
erotica well done, funom... huggs
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/26/2014 7:50:00 AM
Thank you so much nette oncluad
Date: 9/23/2014 10:32:00 AM
powerful piece of writing really very beautifully painted
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Funom Makama
Date: 9/23/2014 10:36:00 AM
Thank you so much Liam mcdaid
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