Funom Makama Poet Romanticism

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I've been willing to write something erotic but I also wanted to create a balance between erotica and avoiding a too obscene poetic picture. This is my second erotic poem which I believe is also not too obscene (just like my first). So I believe anyone, everyone is free to enjoy it... Criticisms are as well welcomed. Thanks

Fantasia Erotica

her multiple attractive sites
leave him confuse and indecisive
her soft abdomen, hollows down from a simple caress
and her excited twin sisters, resonate on her burst
from an interplay below the waist.
Oh! the luscious melons of her backyard
tender and mesmerizing; unique and enslaving
make him appreciate her on top

Squeezing all flesh she possesses
brings out scary energy
which manifests with the passion of immortals
burning both in erotic flames
and sparks of voracious instincts.

Her groans, bathe with her own sweat
with pinned hands, to the surrender of his intense survey
making hormones go swift like dynamic lieutenants
as the artifact of love builds in an incredible speed.

He slides down from lips to hips
with deliberate pauses on strategic stops
as the gear of his kisses
increases with no manual control.

Staying under the shade of her underwear
shielded by the smooth pillars of her thighs
processes the raw of their love.

Now the time is right, the moment is calling
and finally, the gate to the promised land
he enters with a welcome
so magical and immeasurable.

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William J. Jr. Atfield April 14, 2015 at 4:42 PM “ Fantasia Erotica, ” surpasses any, of the many, I have put forth. I am impressed that you have accomplished so much in just eleven months !!!, keep up the good work !!! B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . ) Funom Makama April 17, 2015 at 11:37 AM thanks William J. I really appreciate your words.. I've been a souper since 2011 though

Mario De Paz December 1, 2014 at 12:30 PM You are very corageous indeed to express erotism in such an open way. I could never do so: your poetry is very effective and full of fantasy! Funom Makama December 3, 2014 at 9:26 AM Oh Lord my God! I am totally speechless to your words... Thank you a zillion for the encouragement

Herzel Poshiwa October 10, 2014 at 4:54 AM EROTIC!!!!! Lovely write Funom, loved the imagery.... Funom Makama October 28, 2014 at 7:30 AM I'm happy you loved it. Thanks a lot for your comments

Matthew Anish October 1, 2014 at 3:45 PM Sensual and erotic verse here which is quite moving. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Funom Makama October 28, 2014 at 7:35 AM Thank you so much Matthew Anish

Richard Lamoureux September 25, 2014 at 8:43 AM This piece has made me smile my friend, tastey and tastefully erotic. Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 8:03 AM Oh.. I'm glad you loved it my friend.

Andrea Dietrich September 24, 2014 at 12:33 AM that is first time I heard of the melons in the back yard vs. the front, and then I realized what you meant! A very sensual poem! WEll done. Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 8:01 AM Thanks a lot Andrea... That just came into my mind and then I penned it down. I had wanted to attribute that line to the ones in front but then, I thought "A resonating twin sisters on the burst" will be better fitted for them.

Thomas Mansfield September 23, 2014 at 2:49 PM Hey Funom, Great eroticism, without the porn. "Luscious melons of her back yard" Such expressionism. I work in Nigeria and am all to familiar with the imagery that seems to be here.. (well it is for me :) ) Keep it up... if you will pardon the pun :) All the Best Thomas Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 7:59 AM Wow! Thats great... I forgot about this! I can remember you said so in your comment on my poem "Africa"... I am happy you not only like it but also are familiar with the imagery.

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty September 23, 2014 at 12:13 PM A grand prelude to making love. rich in highly erotic , charged metaphors. A good erotic poem. Love Funom. Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thanks a lot Rajat for your incredible comment. I really appreciate it,.

Toquyen Harrell September 23, 2014 at 12:12 PM Promised land? Okay lol. Enjoyed! Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 7:52 AM lol... Now I feel so embarrassed. All the same I am glad you enjoyed it.

Nette Onclaud September 23, 2014 at 12:11 PM erotica well done, funom... huggs Funom Makama September 26, 2014 at 7:50 AM Thank you so much nette oncluad

Liam Mcdaid September 23, 2014 at 10:32 AM powerful piece of writing really very beautifully painted Funom Makama September 23, 2014 at 10:36 AM Thank you so much Liam mcdaid