Nette Onclaud Poet Rengay

Fangs of Trickery

Under ghostly moon--
Bloody skeletons hang
Opening coffins

witches brew maggots in cauldrons
at the end of hooded dance

Shrieks from bleak alleys
Ruffle cobweb  hairs
Medusa hunts for flesh

a shortening  of pulses
mingles with children’s sweats

Pumpkin lanterns
expand knifed fangs
Loot bags ripping

from cracked windows of  trickery
Halloween’s beat mounting,  run!


*alternating 3- and 2-lines, traditional rengay

For Rusell Sivey's The Ultimate Halloween Contest
by nette onclaud

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Caryl Muzzey October 14, 2012 at 10:41 AM Congratulations Nette, on your win with this wonderful Rengay. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

Sara Kendrick October 12, 2012 at 4:16 PM Congrats on your winning work..Great writing always reaps rewards..Sara

Joyce Johnson October 11, 2012 at 9:35 PM This is the ultimate alright. I can only deal with pumpkins. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown October 11, 2012 at 12:13 PM Congratulations on your win in Russell's "The Ultimate Halloween" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Terry O'Leary October 11, 2012 at 3:04 AM Congratulations on your win! Terry

Terry O'Leary September 24, 2012 at 6:24 AM Super achievement! Very nice (though gory) imagery ... good luck in the contest... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)

Joann Grisetti September 22, 2012 at 6:06 PM Nice use of rengay for Russell. I loved Halloween as a child.

Wilma Neels September 21, 2012 at 11:55 AM Eerie write you have here Nette, aenjoyed tonight :) *hugs* Wilma

Kash Poet September 21, 2012 at 8:25 AM Spooky!!!!Very nice poem on Halloween Nette!Best wishes to you.

Carol Sunshine Brown September 21, 2012 at 4:40 AM At the top of the winners list is where I see this dear Nette. Thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol

Vesna Kovrlija September 20, 2012 at 10:11 PM I enjoyed reading this poem.

Andrea Dietrich September 20, 2012 at 8:55 PM So this is Rengay. You are so good at these shorter forms, Nette. This is sure to stir the judge's couldron!!! Great Halloween poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 20, 2012 at 8:46 PM oh luv this foem and grand words of Halloween horror described with vibrant visuals Nette luv .. wishing u a top win for an adventuresome entry ..

James Marshall Goff September 20, 2012 at 8:00 PM Very cool Nette! Imagery super original!....to your challenge...ok! I will write a sequel to "straw man" this wkend....titled "False Flag, the 2012 Presidential Campaign" thanks for your interest! Jimbo

Russell Sivey September 20, 2012 at 3:43 PM I am so excited right now, my good friend Nette has written a Halloween poem! You really should enter this write into my contest my friend! And to top it off, you wrote Rengay, I am so happy, you pleased me so Nette! Isn't the Rengay run? It's different, and quite interesting! This is a truly wonderful write, a glorious poem, Awesome piece, Great Work!!

Poet Destroyer A September 20, 2012 at 2:30 PM Nette, awee.. i love the fangs,, now I'm gonna keep running in mind...lol... nice eerie image... always~pd