Fancy Light - Dr Ram -

Fancy Light  (COLLAB) Dr Ram

by~ DR RAM:

Once her tumbled hair was bright with flame
That her eyes sapphire with twinkling stars 
And her lips were never to be missed to kiss. 
She accepted a man who offered her bounty
 Knowing there was a beast in him though. 
She thought he is a changed man now 
And he has sloughed off the skin he wore.
As the time passed when her beauty faded......


by~ POET D:

She became one again, no longer a pair
Two strangers all over again,
Walking a path alone in her hall way.
Pleasure in the dark * alone * tonight!
A beast she became in her own world
Wakening to the morning bells of Spring
Unchained from a bounty without promise
Removing  all doubt, the milk on her face begun to gain color.


A Collaboration with *Dr Ram

~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 10:59 PM
love ya **SKAT**
Yvonne Avatar
September 18, 2014 at 5:36 PM
A lovely collaboration.
D. Avatar
October 27, 2011 at 10:19 AM
you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!
Fields Avatar
August 27, 2011 at 7:27 AM
This is a lovely poem, by two of my most beloved author's. I am green with envey,I you don't do it with me! I know that it is hard, but is can be fun...It's you and me now baby, let the writing begun/(began really) You and DR. RAM Complement's each other! Love your's especially....this is a favorite, to beat all favorite's!!!!!! Your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS Keep the write-up, Up. Kiss>Kiss/Kiss-up.....
Maverick Avatar
July 28, 2011 at 5:05 AM
A real interesting creation from you both well worth the readP D}, & thank you for your comments, i am really busy at the moment, also i am having trouble getting service on my computer..i tried for 2 hrs last night! so i hope all my friends on the soup will be patient with me.!
Minardi Avatar
July 25, 2011 at 11:35 AM
"The milk of her face begun to gain color" I love this expression. Nice collaboration with Dr. Ram :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 10:14 PM
well, it's a bit hard for me to understand, but I really like the feeling of it, PD. Once again you matched him in style. I think you are very good at matching styles. soupmail.
Ball Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:44 PM
Very nice tale you weave here. Filled with longing and disillusionment and just a touch of mystery. Nice job. God Bless, JB
Rams Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:51 PM
this was penned beautifully !
Guzzi Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:10 PM
You did a good job of blending, I like to do one with you too but not for the contest I don't think it's good form to judge your own verses. I am glad it's inspiring you. light & love
Sweetheart Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 8:24 AM
oh how lovely u two teamed up PD my BFF.. wonderful words stirring and inspiring much.. good luck with this lovely piece.. far as mine ..breaks can be after every fourth line or put all 13 together as one.. I think better as one luv.. whatever u decide just let me know ..then we will post the finished product.. OK.. glad u liked the lines luv..your BFF forever..
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 6:01 AM
Interesting work..I especially liked the last three lines of Dr. Ram..Sad this does happen so many times today..The way that the shunned handled the rejection was excellent.Thanks for stopping by, reading and giving a kind review of my work...Sara
Brown Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:59 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and awesome piece P.D. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
Dufresne Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 5:55 AM
hmm interesting collab and well done in keeping with the thoughts expressed. Just good literature in my understanding. Nicely done together. I can see where this could get your creative juices flowing for sure
Sadberry Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 11:19 PM
Ps. Smile, *^_^* “Just Wished to Stop Back By & Say Thank You *^_^* My Dear for The Visit & Kind Com & Yesss, I Shall Take Care As Also Your Beauties Self, Beautiful LeeAnn.” === My Love to You As Always, Jasper *
Sadberry Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 9:55 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Really Love The Depth Found Within These Wonderfully Expressed & Spoken Words = My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful LeeAnn == To Bring to Life A Canvas & Allow Another to Step Into The Beauty of Anothers Deepest Heart *^_^* As A Viewer Tis What One Searches for To Be Touched & To Touch, The Spirit of Another *^_^* Entwined Amid A Moment In Time With, Something Very Beautiful *^_^* Just Like You &, Tis A Fave.” === My Love to You Always & Forever, Jasper *
George   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:40 PM
Great Collaboration PD and Dr. Ram. Lainie
Roberts Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 6:44 PM
well that was a great collaboration you two
A   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 6:30 PM
PLEASE EVERY ONE ENJOY ,, EACH AND EVERY ONE OF MY COLLABORATIONS. HOPEFULLY I ACCOMPLISH ALL 35..LOL.. TAKE CARE..X-X-X-X-X-X HUGS,, P.D.
Long Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 6:22 PM
this is awesome nicely done.. Soup Mail I sent it to you in a previous email.. cory
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