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Fancy Light - a Repost

Fancy Light - A collaboration Fancy Light - Dr Ram - Fancy Light (COLLAB) Dr Ram by~ DR RAM: Once her tumbled hair was bright with flame That her eyes sapphire with twinkling stars And her lips were never to be missed to kiss. She accepted a man who offered her bounty Knowing there was a beast in him though. She thought he is a changed man now And he has sloughed off the skin he wore. As the time passed when her beauty faded...... by~ POET D: She became one again, no longer a pair Two strangers all over again, Walking a path alone in her hall way. Pleasure in the dark * alone * tonight! A beast she became in her own world Wakening to the morning bells of Spring Unchained from a bounty without promise Removing all doubt, the milk on her face begun to gain color.
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ I have reposted the poem a collaboration between me and P.D sometime in Sept.2011. I dedicate my part of the poem to you sweet Linda. First Place win Contest: That's All Folks by P.D. A Collaboration with * P.D. Fifth Place win in the contest: ~MY COLLABORATION CONTEST~

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Date: 1/12/2014 5:07:00 AM
absolutely superb Ram congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 1/12/2014 1:48:00 AM
Teaches me that disillusionment can liberate doctor. A fine juxtaposition of despiritedness and reemergence. J.A.B.
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Date: 1/11/2014 5:13:00 PM
I noticed your name on the list..Congrats.Sara
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Date: 1/11/2014 5:03:00 PM
A deeply emotional write, and an amazing collaboration between you and PD! Excellent work! Congratulations on your well deserved win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poems.
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Date: 1/11/2014 2:41:00 PM
very nice collab ...congrats on your win
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Date: 1/11/2014 9:13:00 AM
This is good and congratulations for the lovely win
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Date: 1/11/2014 1:53:00 AM
Dr Ram., Congratulations:) --- Thank you for supporting the last contest I will host for the time being. Take Care, and enjoy the fun blog, I posted honoring all winning poems.... Blog Called "Unicorn__" ---> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?PoetID=18720&BlogID=18529 Take Care, <3 Always & Forever ~LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2014 6:14:00 PM
Nicely done here my friend wonderfully visual words loved it. can thank you for your comments. cheri
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