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Fanciful Thinking

Wearing the finest designer clothes good character does not make, For many a multi-millionaire has been discovered to be an outright fake. Godly words are mighty easy to pen-- easier than living the Golden Rule Or thinking of yourself more highly than you ought, well, it’s nothing but pure bull. Throwing money or words around without sowing a meaningful seed Is fanciful thinking at its absolute best, and, the rewards are hollow indeed. FIRST PLACE WINNER written June 16, 2021 for Brian Strand's "July, 2021" Poetry Contest

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Date: 7/2/2021 8:37:00 AM
Very true ! Congratulations on your win !!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paris-Maree for your thoughtful comment.
Date: 7/2/2021 8:27:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win, Milton, I love this write on fanciful thinking, in my fave. Blessings and best regards
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 9:48:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad. I greatly appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 7/2/2021 8:08:00 AM
A beautiful write on fanciful thinking. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/2/2021 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Christuraj. I appreciated your read and comment.
Date: 6/17/2021 2:40:00 AM
"throwing money or words around" - I am snickering because of the truth in this one.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/17/2021 9:04:00 AM
Too much of that crap in our society. I'm becoming a disgruntled, crotchety old man.

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