Family Tree

the kiss of Summer sweet with shapely leaves and scent but Autumn’s sweeter vibrant the family tree ornaments ubiquitous 9/23/2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 8:31 AM
Kim, this poem the the tender delicacy of an autumn kiss.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 10:05 AM
Thank you!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 9:41 PM
Lovely tanka. Everyone loves autumn. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
September 24, 2020 at 3:49 AM
Thank you, Victor! I know I do! Hugs, sweet friend!
Andresen Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 12:49 PM
- Beautiful family tree, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Kauffman Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 11:47 AM
Kim, I love the theme of the family tree and its ornaments - "ubiquitous." Wonderful poem.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 6:05 PM
Thank you, Sam!
Ashley Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 8:56 AM
Absolutely beautiful, Kim! I adore the spirit and the vivid imagery of this poem. Your last line is genius. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
September 23, 2020 at 9:26 AM
Thank you so much, Susan!
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