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Family Tree

the kiss of Summer sweet with shapely leaves and scent but Autumn’s sweeter vibrant the family tree ornaments ubiquitous 9/23/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/24/2020 8:31:00 AM

Kim, this poem the the tender delicacy of an autumn kiss.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2020 10:05:00 AM

Thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/23/2020 9:41:00 PM

Lovely tanka. Everyone loves autumn. ~~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/24/2020 3:49:00 AM

Thank you, Victor! I know I do! Hugs, sweet friend!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/23/2020 12:49:00 PM

- Beautiful family tree, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2020 6:05:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/23/2020 11:47:00 AM

Kim, I love the theme of the family tree and its ornaments - "ubiquitous." Wonderful poem.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2020 6:05:00 PM

Thank you, Sam!

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/23/2020 8:56:00 AM

Absolutely beautiful, Kim! I adore the spirit and the vivid imagery of this poem. Your last line is genius. Warmest wishes always, dear poetess.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2020 9:26:00 AM

Thank you so much, Susan!