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Family 1-10 Then10-1

1 Family can be so much fun 2 They care so much about you 3 Look how much they all love me 4 What else can a girl ask for 5 They keep all the memories alive 6 Some things you just don't need to fix 7 Sure wish I was still eleven 8 That's when my family was great 9 Always together spending time 10 You just have to love them Then 10 Family sucks thank god for friends Let's go again 10 Don't ever ever ask about me again 9 Hope you love yours could care less about mine Let's go again 9 No one is there to help when your falling behind 8 When you need your money back they hesitate 7 All you two faced sinners talking about going to heaven 6 How many problems can one person fix Let's go again 6 They always got you caught up in the mix 5 Poetry soup helps me survive Let's go again 5 Poetry soup keeps me alive 4 Still at my door wanting more and more Let's go again 4 I just can't take it anymore 3 How many times are you going to borrow from me Let's go again 3 I help everyone but nobody can help me 2 I can't take no more lies from you Let's go again 2 There's nothing else that I can do 1 so disgusted that's it I'm done Family for rambling poet contest In search of the human mind

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Date: 3/31/2010 3:05:00 PM
Faleshia, one of the best I have read or heard. You certainly have a way with words. Best Wishes Always, Bill (Soup Mail)
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Date: 3/31/2010 11:38:00 AM
Very interesting Faleshia. Good job. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments.
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Date: 3/31/2010 6:05:00 AM
We cannot select our family as we can with friends, but we have to live with it. Wishing you good luck for the contest and thank you for your comments---Have a happy Easter! Gert
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Date: 3/30/2010 4:32:00 PM
Families are complicated! Wishing you well in the contest!! BEst wishes, Carrie
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Date: 3/30/2010 12:51:00 PM
I hear you Faleshia and I feel ya too. I think I see this in the winners circle. I know it should be. Thank you for sharing my friend. Love, Carol
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