Familiar Glances

It's not just the poetry of you I love, but
the subtle nuances 'neath your warm demeanor,
the way your breath kisses the nape of my neck
whilst you gently brush my hair aside my eyes
looking intently into them with the intensity
like I've felt from none other man's intentions,
how your lips coax the most wicked tendencies
& the mere sound of your voice makes me tremble,
in the way you covet my body with lustful bliss
when your desirous hunger is at full thrusting,
and the fiery familiar glances between our sighs
midst consummately surrendered breathlessness

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 12/8/2016 8:29:00 PM
After reading this hot , and erotic piece I got the feeling that the mild mark of mere familiar glances was already in the distant past. Desirous hunger can also be a dangerous thing, if its for another person's spouse. This poem clearly rings the bell of a hot, consummated love.
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Date: 11/23/2016 11:49:00 AM
Beautiful, no better word.
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Date: 11/23/2016 11:10:00 AM
Awww Paloma.... Longing for my boyfriend now ... :(
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:40:00 AM
Grrr
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Date: 11/22/2016 7:20:00 PM
i simply couldn't resist those bedroom eyes and those soft feminine curves of yours. Same place tomorrow:) I'll bring the champagne. Steamy write! You said you wouldn't tell.
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Date: 11/22/2016 3:07:00 PM
Powerfully romantica, Paloma. Very erotic and sensual. You're gonna have to put your pen down when you making love, or else a guy is gonna be looking at your words more than you, that's how appealing your writing is lady. Great write. Love and blessings.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:24:00 PM
I've got the strangest image in my head now. :) Much appreciate your attentiveness Freddie!
Date: 11/22/2016 2:03:00 PM
Ok, now I need a shower...a cold one. This was sizzling Paloma but in such a beautiful and caressing way. You have created a scene that is steamy but soft because love was the focus. Absolutely beautiful.
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:22:00 PM
I've been hanging around your pages Chris. :) Thanks so much for your enthusiasm!
Date: 11/22/2016 1:56:00 PM
WoW! I must say this is sizzling hot with class. If found it very romantic as well. Well done. A without a doubt seven: -) Alexis
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Paloma P
Date: 11/22/2016 3:20:00 PM
I'm thrilled you enjoyed this one Alexis! :)
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