Get Your Premium Membership

False Love

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Debbie Guzzi.


A seeming kindness and gentleness wooed me 
and like a wounded dove beneath your hand, I quivered.
To calm a flight filled heart was your decree
and yet conquest and not contact was delivered,
wanting, waiting, for your touch, I shivered.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




Post Comments
Please Login to post a comment
Date: 10/27/2017 2:17:00 PM
Beautiful...
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/1/2017 7:43:00 PM
Thank you dear!
Date: 8/25/2015 8:59:00 PM
An depth filled write on the anticipation of love. Excellent write Debbie! Hugs
Login to Reply
Date: 7/22/2015 10:11:00 PM
So short but the message deep and long. Returned to read this yet again. If only I could write such power in such few words! I envy you that great poetic talent my friend. A7
Login to Reply
Date: 7/16/2015 7:19:00 PM
This one is a true gem. False love I endured twice in my life and its pains ate me into my soul. This one is positive and inspiring! A7
Login to Reply
Date: 7/9/2015 7:01:00 AM
This is an awesome write. I appreciate the true message of your candid expression.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2015 11:30:00 PM
The man conquered you with his sweet sounds it seems. Stimulating write! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Date: 7/2/2015 10:36:00 AM
Great poem with a lovely message. Thanks for the Grade 7 share.
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2015 9:59:00 PM
I am captivated by this lovely romantic Quintain! Congratulations, dear Debbie on a most deserved win! Pandita
Login to Reply
Date: 7/1/2015 4:44:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome poetry Debbie!
Login to Reply
Date: 6/30/2015 10:46:00 PM
Debbie, Congrats, this is a sweet win. Love **SKAT**
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2015 10:26:00 PM
I love yours, Deb. Congrats for your win.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2015 6:33:00 PM
Debbie, congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2015 5:31:00 PM
Congrats on your win in my contest..Thanks so much for your participation..Way to go..Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 6/28/2015 9:34:00 AM
An awesome quaintain this is my dear friend, Deb. I love it so much and I am so delighted to read one of your precious gems this evening. Thanks a lot for sharing! Thanks a lot as well for visiting my Mehndi poem. I'll post photo soon to tell more about it. So sorry for being late to get back to you cuz I was recovering from flu. Have a blessed wkend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2015 8:39:00 PM
Never ordinary are your poems..I can always count on something unique and special > :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/26/2015 8:09:00 AM
Debbie back to read this beauty again and to thank you so much for my awesome placement in your Talk the talk . . . contest, I am beyond honored
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/26/2015 12:24:00 PM
well I had no idea it was you Constance how wonderful - you really stepped outside the box! BIG HUGS!!
Date: 6/23/2015 8:56:00 PM
Debbie, this is beautifully penned and quite wonderful. A 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, fantasy dreaming
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2015 8:32:00 PM
I seem to have read the same theme from another write of yours, Deb- The Score. Though this is more subdued and the other one includes aspect that necessitate euphemism. Once again, I am awed by your poetry.
Login to Reply
Guzzi Avatar
Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/23/2015 10:17:00 PM
I guess I do write of love often Kim, I need to cut that out LOL thanks for stopping by!
Date: 6/23/2015 6:03:00 PM
What a beautiful Quintain, Debbie! The gentleness and sense of anticipation can be felt, yet true love is not delivered. All the best. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2015 8:27:00 AM
What an intriguing piece, you painted it beautiful full of imagery and so emotive....................A.M.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2015 9:11:00 PM
I can sense the anticipation.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/22/2015 2:22:00 AM
Strong picture, emotion and poetry delivered. Bravo.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2015 2:20:00 PM
Nicely done my friend! So much depth and power in so few words! A7....actually deserves a ten IMHO.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/21/2015 10:50:00 AM
Very well done with wonderful feeling and depth that brought the scene to life. Emile.
Login to Reply