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Fall's Descent

tints of bright color
             on green leaves transitioning
                     before fall’s descent


Heidi Sands

9/7/19

autumnchangehaiku

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Joseph May

September 8, 2019 at 6:20 PM

Great haiku Heidi...enjoyed

Heidi Sands

September 8, 2019 at 6:23 PM

Thanks Joseph. I am starting to see the partial color on some leaves. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Arturo Michael

September 8, 2019 at 8:26 AM

Nice imagery here...

Heidi Sands

September 8, 2019 at 8:38 AM

Thank you Arturo :)

Silent One

September 8, 2019 at 8:14 AM

What lovely imagery... beautiful..

Heidi Sands

September 8, 2019 at 8:17 AM

Thank you SO :)

Vijay Pandit

September 7, 2019 at 4:11 PM

Beautiful like the arrival of fall..all the best, Heidi.

Heidi Sands

September 7, 2019 at 4:25 PM

Thank you Vijay. Enjoy the beauty :)

Carolyn Devonshire

September 7, 2019 at 2:09 PM

How I wish those leaves could retain their bright fall colors throughout winter. As you describe, it is the natural progression from one season to another. A lovely haiku, Heidi! Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn

Heidi Sands

September 7, 2019 at 3:38 PM

The bright colors can pass by fast. But, then we have beauty in winter too. Thank you Carolyn :)