Fall's Descent

tints of bright color on green leaves transitioning before fall’s descent Heidi Sands 9/7/19

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Joseph May

Date: 9/8/2019 6:20:00 PM

Great haiku Heidi...enjoyed

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2019 6:23:00 PM

Thanks Joseph. I am starting to see the partial color on some leaves. I am happy you enjoyed this :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 9/8/2019 8:26:00 AM

Nice imagery here...

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2019 8:38:00 AM

Thank you Arturo :)

Silent One

Date: 9/8/2019 8:14:00 AM

What lovely imagery... beautiful..

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/8/2019 8:17:00 AM

Thank you SO :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/7/2019 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful like the arrival of fall..all the best, Heidi.

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2019 4:25:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. Enjoy the beauty :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/7/2019 2:09:00 PM

How I wish those leaves could retain their bright fall colors throughout winter. As you describe, it is the natural progression from one season to another. A lovely haiku, Heidi! Best wishes in the contest. Love, carolyn

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2019 3:38:00 PM

The bright colors can pass by fast. But, then we have beauty in winter too. Thank you Carolyn :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/7/2019 10:26:00 AM

- Lovely described, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands
Date: 9/7/2019 10:31:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise :)