Poet Destroyer A Poet Triolet

Fall's Beginning

Fall's Beginning  

- featuring Sara Kendrick
 
The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky
Crinolines on horizon with gown
Early zephyr cool and air wrung dry
The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky
A start to a wonderful day birds cry
Leaves in places now caramel brown
The Easter dresses strown across morn's sky
Crinolines on horizon with gown

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We walk the green fern garden range
We sit and stare and tease our eyes
Emotions flow with my Easter dress so strange
Easter morn vocals came within range
We’re dancing, like leaves that rearrange
I twirl my gown to fly with the skies
Angel dust travels swiftly in the open range
Clouds fall vividly on my gown like crinolines disguise!


~A Poet Destroyer Collaboration~

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Skat A February 4, 2016 at 10:53 PM falls who? **SKAT**

Harry Horsman October 24, 2013 at 11:14 AM love having to go back and read you, PD, and also a chance to see another favourite poet of mine, Sara,, amazing poetry you two make...

Robin Davis October 15, 2013 at 4:45 PM Linda These words are creative and fun. Your imagination and imagery lets the reader be in this dreamy and vivid place. nice job my friend

Poet Destroyer A September 1, 2013 at 2:43 PM Thanks G.... xox...LINDA

Tim Ryerson August 26, 2013 at 9:43 PM Oh my oh my, You done done it again!... Sara gave it away which was which with her comment...I do believe this is the first time I've seen you rhyme...Beautiful stuff - Tim

Len Gasun August 24, 2013 at 7:17 PM Good morning my everdearest sis! Giving you and also our very dear friend Sara my biggest sweetest hugs on this well-deserved super win, your excellent & perfect collaboration poem and triolet! Hugs & more hugs with my huge hearty CONGRATULATIONS! You both did great! So love this piece. I'm extremely happy to read it today. Sorry for just coming now 'cuz I got fever lately but I'm getting better now. Thank you so much my dearest sis! Hope you & your love ones are doing well. Have a blessed wkend! Tcare! Hugs & kisses! love m4evr, Leonora

Skat A August 24, 2013 at 4:48 PM sweeter than sweet... congrats...SKAT

Eileen Manassian August 24, 2013 at 5:22 AM How DELIGHTFUL!!!!!!!!! I loved this dreamy piece....Beautiful dresses that celebrate the joy of living. Congratulations....Well deserving win for you both!!

Joyce Johnson August 23, 2013 at 6:08 PM I'd love t see your Easter dress. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Sara Kendrick August 23, 2013 at 1:53 PM I remember my pastel Easter dresses and crinolines..Thanks for using my work as a stepping stone..Congrats on your great win..Sara ...I have posted a new one that you might get a chuckle from reading..Sara

Carrie Richards August 23, 2013 at 1:44 PM You have dressed mother nature in her very best !! Lovely winning poem!!

Sandra Adams August 23, 2013 at 1:19 PM beautiful collaboration between two talented poets...congrats on the win!

Joseph May August 23, 2013 at 12:23 PM congrats on a great win Linda

Debbie Guzzi August 23, 2013 at 7:07 AM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Nathan D. October 27, 2011 at 10:08 AM you give people a chance to collab with you and this is what you get .... great job!!!

Jl Sadberry September 1, 2011 at 11:34 AM Smile, *^_^* “Very Pleasant This Lovely Image That Your Beauties Brushed Sooo Softly My Dear Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful LeeAnn! *^_^* I Found Myself for Some Reason Walking Through The Streets of Boston or New York During The 19th Century *^_^* And The Two of Your Treasures Had Your Lovely Hats With Flowers & The Morning Sun Was Shining & Your Faces Glowed Within Such Radiance & Warmth As You Were Smiling & I Was Thinking, Ow, How Very Beautiful!” === My Love Unto Your Sweet Beauty, Always & Forever, Jasper *

Robert A. Dufresne August 30, 2011 at 8:43 AM you and Sara paired up beautifully on this little lovely. Well done to you both!

David Williams August 27, 2011 at 7:45 AM another great collab, kept flowing all the way through, well done both of you, David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart August 26, 2011 at 12:06 AM Sara another friend is so excellent at Nature poetry ..she knows so much about flowers and planting and stuff... this is exquisite and once again PD my BFF u have complimented with this composition .. how are u ever going to choose winners at judging time when everyone I read is tremendous luv? your BFF for life if we make it out of this weather oh..

Chiquitachiamaka Baity August 25, 2011 at 9:55 PM Wonderful write...a pleasure to read... thanks both of you for sharing your amazing talent!!!!! i would really like to collaborate with you... i've been so busy with school that i havent really had time to write.. anyway.....well done.....smiles....chiquita

Sara Kendrick August 25, 2011 at 8:23 PM Enjoyed the flow of your part..I like the way that you went with the idea..Thanks for the collaboration..Sara

James Foulk August 25, 2011 at 1:27 PM you both did a fine job, very creative. thank you for commenting on farewell for now soupers. i won't have the internet after the 27th and maybe sooner, it keeps going out, sometimes for a day or two, so this could be my last time on here, until i get the internet again, thank you for all of your support.

Carol Sunshine Brown August 25, 2011 at 10:10 AM Lift your pen and let your creative words flow onto the paper P.D. Thank you for sharing your writing with us as I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning. You and Sara did a great poem together. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich August 25, 2011 at 9:52 AM It's nice to see you trying the triolet. I know how much SAra loves this form and I love these! soupmail

Nancy Jones August 25, 2011 at 12:23 AM gulp it, girl! nice ...

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