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Falls Beauty

Trees
Reflect
Off the lake
Autumn's beauty
Rowing across the lake in falls beauty


3rd place
Picture #1
Sponsor: Joseph May
Contest: Tetractys Make it five poetry
Date:9/21/2019

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John Fleming

August 7, 2025 at 6:56 AM

I really like this poem, Brenda Lee. So very, very soothing. Reminds me when I was a boy and my father and I would go out in the rowing boat fly fishing for trout. Beautiful, beautiful days. Sighhh. :) john

Brenda Chiri

August 9, 2025 at 1:10 PM

Thank you dear John!;)

D.W. Rodgers

October 3, 2019 at 7:17 PM

Congrats on your win - 31 syllables that make the picture.

Brenda Chiri

October 3, 2019 at 9:38 PM

DW thank you so much! Appreciate your visit!;)

Andrea Dietrich

September 29, 2019 at 2:30 PM

this was a popular picture and I enjoyed your description for it. Congrats, Brenda.

Brenda Chiri

October 3, 2019 at 9:38 PM

Hey Andrea yes I seen that too! Lol ! Thank you for stopping by!;)

Paul Callus

September 28, 2019 at 3:38 AM

Autumn's beauty has well inspired you, Brenda! Congratulations on your podium finish:) Warm regards // paul

Brenda Chiri

October 3, 2019 at 9:37 PM

Thank you so much Paul!;)

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 27, 2019 at 2:24 AM

- Congratulations on your winning poem, Brenda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri

September 27, 2019 at 9:19 AM

Anne-Lise thank you so much!;)

Joseph May

September 26, 2019 at 9:10 PM

Very nicely penned Brenda, Congrats on your win!..

Quoth Theraven

September 23, 2019 at 9:13 AM

Brenda, Nicely captured beauty..,Autumn's rippled rowing. -Richard

Brenda Chiri

September 23, 2019 at 3:15 PM

Thank you Richard I'm glad you enjoyed this one!;)

Anisha Dutta

September 23, 2019 at 8:16 AM

Real Beauty. All the best.

Brenda Chiri

September 23, 2019 at 3:14 PM

Anisha thank you so much!;)

Chris Green

September 23, 2019 at 8:11 AM

Wonderfully done Brenda. You have captured the essence if the photo beautifully in this. Best wishes in the contest.

Brenda Chiri

September 23, 2019 at 3:14 PM

Thanks so much!;)

Richard Lamoureux

September 22, 2019 at 1:28 AM

I like your picture Brenda. Hugs Rick.

Brenda Chiri

September 22, 2019 at 3:55 AM

Thank you Rick! You are too kind!;)

Susan Ashley

September 21, 2019 at 7:50 PM

Ahh, fall’s beauty is magnificent to behold, dear sissy. You’ve spilled lovely ink yet again. Me and the Unicorns love it! Best wishes for a win my insanely awesome sissy. Love and hugs.. your sane sis <3

Susan Ashley

September 22, 2019 at 8:44 AM

FYI dear sissy; the Unicorns ‘expect’ you to make them happy lol! You know how demanding they are haha! Stamping their little hooves in Unicorn tantrums and all... ;)

Brenda Chiri

September 22, 2019 at 3:54 AM

Ahh sissy! Or should I say the same sissy! Lol! Thank you so much and my goal has always been to make the unicorns happy! Lmao!;)