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Fall's Allegiance

Autumn leaves dance in the wind As it's breath awakens the trees The limbs tremble in defiance As they try to resist the breeze The trees shiver in the cool morning air As the dew gives way to the frost They know their armor will soon be gone For all of their leaves will be lost Winter stands ready to enter the stage And for Autumn to relinquish it's hold It's time for Winter to abandon it's slumber And Autumn must welcome the cold Winter demands Fall's allegiance Like a General shouting commands Autumn must follow it's orders For the time of change is at hand Winter's cold winds show restraint As Autumn surrenders in shame The trees bow in silence With only Winter to blame Winter takes it's rightful place 'Til Spring revenges Fall's death But Winter will battle until the end 'Til it breathes it's final breath

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/6/2010 4:24:00 AM
Great rhyme and meter in this cleverly written poem, Larry. I enjoyed reading this today. Thanks.
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Date: 11/5/2010 8:39:00 PM
Tremendous word picture, Larry. Great job. Gave me the winter chills. Excellent. Have a great weekend. Ralph
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Date: 11/5/2010 12:04:00 PM
"the trees bow in silence" so many beautiful lines in your poem, just wonderful, I really enjoyed reading it and thanks so much for your comments on my poetry~~
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