Falling Up!!!

Soul ascending
freeing
weightless thoughts
lifted shoulders
eyes to nowhere
searching 
plunging its way to abandonment.....
sounds whisper
light 
sight unrestored
cautious heart....
Flaming bird
sweeping.....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wellington Avatar
November 21, 2010 at 7:15 AM
Yes! Talent here. Great imagery! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
Devonshire Avatar
March 13, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Karena, wonderful images of a soul cllimbing to heaven. And the "flaming bird (perhaps a phoenix rising from the ashes) sweeping" up as well. Clever title, too. Sparked my interest! Love, Carolyn
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