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Falling Up!!!

Soul ascending
freeing
weightless thoughts
lifted shoulders
eyes to nowhere
searching 
plunging its way to abandonment.....
sounds whisper
light 
sight unrestored
cautious heart....
Flaming bird
sweeping.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/21/2010 7:15:00 AM
Yes! Talent here. Great imagery! Blessings, Joy (Jew)
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Date: 3/13/2009 8:08:00 AM
Karena, wonderful images of a soul cllimbing to heaven. And the "flaming bird (perhaps a phoenix rising from the ashes) sweeping" up as well. Clever title, too. Sparked my interest! Love, Carolyn
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