Falling Stars

Fizz'ling across skies
Wished upon for a moment
Night lights performing-

Disappearing Acts!
Little flames with little fame
Down from the heavens
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Fraser Avatar
June 2, 2009 at 3:57 PM
Sparkling fireworks in the sky, fly by - we sigh, nice write>James
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November 29, 2008 at 12:26 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification in this haiku. Thank you for allowing me to smile with your words. Keep on writing. Karen
Matheny Avatar
November 29, 2008 at 10:01 AM
The "Z" Is silent so it's just Alex
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November 28, 2008 at 8:04 PM
This is very nice..I wanted to keep reading it..enjoyed it each time. BG
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