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Warm stars huddles in
     Froze expanse oblivious
          To its tenuous strands hold

Vague falls one or more
     Breaks free in beheld eyes gaze
          Froze in imagination.


Date: 06/02/2019

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Date: 6/3/2019 2:03:00 PM
Hello illiam Kekula, such a beautiful poem about the stars. i have enjoyed. have a nice day my friend.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/6/2019 5:45:00 PM
Your welcome Aloha! Darlene
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/3/2019 2:07:00 PM
Thanks for your kindness Darlene, Aloha William
Date: 6/3/2019 3:21:00 AM
But as the song goes, one always tries to catch a falling star.
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William Kekaula
Date: 6/3/2019 6:03:00 AM
Ergo, imagination...lest you'd be a speck of dust 'tis the reality of it, thanks for waking me Victor, Aloha William