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Falling Stars

Warm stars huddles in
     Froze expanse oblivious
          To its tenuous strands hold

Vague falls one or more
     Breaks free in beheld eyes gaze
          Froze in imagination.


Date: 06/02/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:03 PM
Hello illiam Kekula, such a beautiful poem about the stars. i have enjoyed. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
June 6, 2019 at 5:45 PM
Your welcome Aloha! Darlene
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
June 3, 2019 at 2:07 PM
Thanks for your kindness Darlene, Aloha William
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