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Speaking of Sedoka Poetry Contest- Sponsored by Nette Onclaud. 5/29/2026

Falling Rocks- Sedoka

A river of rocks 
Tumbling from mountain top peaks 
Crashing, crunching, covering 

What caused them to roll? 
Perhaps, it was nature's call 
On the rector scale- an eight
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Etgen-Baker Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 2:27 PM
well done for the contest...unique and creative. wishing you well.
George Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 9:41 PM
A very well thought out cause for the rolling down of rocks--- an earthquake of alarming proportions! Great entry. Best of luck, dear Charlie.
Dietrich Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 12:55 PM
That 8 would do it. Very nice. And thanks for my placement with Chico
Rodrigues Avatar
May 29, 2026 at 11:46 AM
We find out in the end! I can’t see and hear the splash!
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