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Falling Rain

As the rain falls down on me, Before the end of the day. Curtains will rise once more, During the final play. Even as the sun goes down, Falling from the sky. Greeting us the stars will shine. Heaven knows why. I often wonder if we deserve this Justice Kindness Life. Meaning that if we don't give it, Never will we spare strife. Oppressing the weak, Persuing the poor. Questioning some things Realizing more. Still as life goes on Trying as we might. Ultimately loosing Violently in this fight We cant go on in life like this. X-ing out everything You were the first bell in my life but Z is the last to ring.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 2/11/2009 4:52:00 AM
Jonathan congrats on being featured this week - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/10/2009 9:30:00 AM
Congratulations Jonathan, on the featuring of "Falling Rain." Vince
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Date: 2/9/2009 12:38:00 AM
ABC is quite a crazy form... but you have done justice! Good job! ~ Arany
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Date: 2/8/2009 4:00:00 PM
Good use of this challenging form for a thought provoking poem. Congratulations on having it featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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