Barbara Gorelick Poet Couplet

Falling Leaves

      



Like golden treasure they flutter down
On autumn winds they float to the ground
Carpeting  the earth without a sound
Today's little miracle I have happily found....
 

We have a bit of a wind today and the
 maple leaves are falling like rain. Its beautiful.

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Vicky Tsiluma November 1, 2012 at 8:00 AM I love your outlook. Most of us see leaves and think 'not again, rake, rake, rake'. But it's important to pause and appreciate the beauty.

Erich Goller October 31, 2012 at 3:54 PM Beautiful Autumn,beautiful rhyming couplets, I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich

Anne-Lise Andresen October 31, 2012 at 3:35 PM A really nice poem Barbara - I like this very much. Have a lovely afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Carl Fraser October 31, 2012 at 1:36 PM Rake up a big pile Barbara, and let the kid in you come out and play. I imagined every line, nicely done, blessings Carl