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Falling Into Autumn

I'm falling with the leaves Autumn brings me to my knees Screaming to the crisp air please Give me just a moment of ease To enjoy this peace, please A soothing grey sky A cooing bird that flies high There is no way I could surely die In this moment of beauty Help me see What else in this blackened broken world is pretty So that this happiness won't flee me

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Date: 1/27/2021 4:00:00 PM
A superb verse. The phrasing especially is original and arresting. Clumped words like the alliteration "blackened broken world" are memorable. Such any enjoyable read. Best wishes, Brian
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Date: 1/28/2021 7:47:00 AM
Thank You :)

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