Dorian Petersen Potter Poet Sonnet

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Falling In Love

(Free Style Sonnet) 


The sky turns from day to night 
There we go my Love in a flight 
Heart then wander at last free 
Till you take me to new heights 

You enchant me more as days go by 
We're entwined in this love so divine 
Thunder clouds roll in, covering dawn 
But I just feel in your arms so fine 

Your love is in me deeply ingrained 
With true patterns of beauty remained 
Life give me a taste of your love to quench 
I only think of you while I sit in this bench 

Lost, still navigating in the sea of your love 
Dreaming till flying with you to heaven above. 


Dorian Petersen Potter 
aka ladydp2000 
copyright@2014


November,29,2014

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Brenda Meier-Hans November 29, 2014 at 7:57 AM Beautifully penned Dorian. Love is so magical poets have been and shall be writing of it for many years. The amazing thing is we never run out of was to describe love. Dorian Petersen Potter November 29, 2014 at 1:12 PM Yes, you're so right my dear friend Brenda. Thank you so kindly for stopping by and your awesome comment. Have a lovely day! Love and hugs! :) xxx D.

Demetrios Trifiatis November 29, 2014 at 4:33 AM To be in love is something purely magical! Nothing seems impossible anymore. Hope you stay in love dear, Dorian, and enjoy life to the maximum! Beautiful romantic verse! Dorian Petersen Potter November 29, 2014 at 1:10 PM Thank you so much for dropping by and all your kind comments my dear friend Demetrios. Likewise my very good wishes for you always! Have a wonderful day now. :) Love and hugs! xxx D.