Shadow Hamilton Poet Sonnet

Falling In Love

Dancing in his arms heart beating so fast
feelings flood through me as he holds me close
is he the one that in dreams was forecast?
I act cool, he smiles knowing its a pose

I smile back as he spins me round and round
we sit and talk the way new lovers do  
to each other glad this love we have found
happiness to both of us long overdue

So in love although we recently met 
our life's before us laid at our feet
The more we are together the less I fret
when he kisses me it feels oh so sweet

Passion rising overtaking us both
to each other turning pledging a troth


dedicated to my very best friend Lorraine and her new chap

written 02/11/2014

contest: Any Poem#4

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Robin Davis April 22, 2014 at 8:10 AM Shadow Such a loving and passionate write. The devotion and care flows in each line so wonderfully. Thank you for the great comment on my Children's Book poem.

Liam Mcdaid February 16, 2014 at 9:08 AM truly very beautifully penned linda dear friend Shadow Hamilton February 16, 2014 at 10:19 AM ty Liam very much appreciated hugs

Bl Devnath February 12, 2014 at 10:24 AM Beautiful dedication, my lovely friend. A nice heartfelt poem. Loved always, bl Shadow Hamilton February 13, 2014 at 7:39 AM ty BL hugs

Kayod5 Kayode February 11, 2014 at 10:40 PM A great one Shadow, I really enjoy this celebration of affection.Kudos... Shadow Hamilton February 12, 2014 at 4:40 AM ty Kayod5 so nice of you hugs

Cherl Dunn February 11, 2014 at 6:42 PM Beautifully penned write enjoyed it alot. Yes love can be a very special thing precious if you ask me I loved the emotion here cheri Shadow Hamilton February 12, 2014 at 4:39 AM ty Cheri glad you enjoyed it hugs

Russell Sivey February 11, 2014 at 5:57 PM This is beautiful, a very delightful write here my friend! I surely loved reading this incredible poem this evening! What a splendid heartfelt relationship! Great Work!! Shadow Hamilton February 12, 2014 at 4:38 AM hi Russell they are so happy it is so nice to see. ty for your wonderful comments most inspiring hugs

Deb Wilson February 11, 2014 at 2:55 PM What an awesome story of new love so deeply felt! luv,Deb Shadow Hamilton February 11, 2014 at 3:15 PM ty very much Deb hugs

Tim Smith February 11, 2014 at 2:41 PM This is beautiful Shadow..I adore new love...Hugs Tim Shadow Hamilton February 11, 2014 at 2:51 PM ty Tim much appreciated hugs