Falling In Love

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Eyes of a definition that needs no description,
His thought penetrates my mind.
As the softness of his power touches my cheek,
I shiver

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Personality of a realistic dream, something I know I could never have.
His confidence compliments my insecurities.
As the voice of 'I need you' ensures trust,
I shake

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Mind of a man that sins, able to admit his faults.
His heart is a struggling comfort,
I don't mind staying here.
As the desire to make us one overrides his mistakes,
I stumble

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Knocked down by his innocence, alive in the moment.
As I find the challenge that keeps me moving,
I fall

FOCUSED
In Love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
March 21, 2011 at 10:55 AM
Thank you!
Brown Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 11:39 AM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Constance. Love, Carol
Wilson Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 5:23 PM
I really like the description of deep love despite everything including faults of each..Take care~Deb
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October 27, 2010 at 2:40 PM
A wonderful profound description of love...enjoyed
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