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Falling In Love

FOCUS Eyes of a definition that needs no description, His thought penetrates my mind. As the softness of his power touches my cheek, I shiver FOCUS Personality of a realistic dream, something I know I could never have. His confidence compliments my insecurities. As the voice of 'I need you' ensures trust, I shake FOCUS Mind of a man that sins, able to admit his faults. His heart is a struggling comfort, I don't mind staying here. As the desire to make us one overrides his mistakes, I stumble FOCUS Knocked down by his innocence, alive in the moment. As I find the challenge that keeps me moving, I fall FOCUSED In Love

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Date: 3/21/2011 10:55:00 AM
Thank you!
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Date: 10/28/2010 11:39:00 AM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Constance. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 5:23:00 PM
I really like the description of deep love despite everything including faults of each..Take care~Deb
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Date: 10/27/2010 2:40:00 PM
A wonderful profound description of love...enjoyed
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