Falling in Love



the click-clack climb, breathless pause of
reaching so high then... falling in love

loveromancecrystalline

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Danny Derden

September 26, 2025 at 2:31 PM

That's a beautifully succinct couplet. It uses the sharp sounds of "click-clack climb" to create tension, which is immediately released by the "breathless pause" before the emotional freefall of "falling in love." It perfectly equates emotional risk with physical height.

Kim Rodrigues

September 22, 2025 at 6:42 AM

So interesting! Congrats!

Crystol Woods

September 22, 2025 at 7:33 AM

Interesting...I like that! Ty! Xo

Tania Kitchin

September 21, 2025 at 3:56 PM

Crystol, congratulations on your winning placement with your charming poem.

Crystol Woods

September 22, 2025 at 7:33 AM

Oh wow, thanks!xo

Andrea Dietrich

September 21, 2025 at 2:27 PM

This is divine. I don't know your placement but I think I just saw this one had a winner list. Congratulations I am sure you must have placed well

Crystol Woods

September 22, 2025 at 7:32 AM

Tysm! Xo

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 17, 2025 at 7:55 AM

Dear Crystol, A beautiful poem. I absolutely love the concise yet powerful imagery you've created. The words "click-clack climb" and "breathless pause" perfectly capture the feeling of anticipation and the moment right before you take the leap. It's a wonderful and very relatable piece. Blessings, Dear Crystol, Daniel

Crystol Woods

September 19, 2025 at 12:05 AM

I'm so glad to hear from you Daniel! I pray you and yours are all well? Ty for your kind review! Xo