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Falling In Love

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Written: April 29, 2024 For Regina Regina Mcintosh Contest ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Meeting her will drown me with her love, It will express pride and bliss from above. Her glance involved an ambivalent dream, Her smile is ambrosian whenever we team. I will cry with her and soothe her fears, Lend her comfort and wipe away her tears. Her love shakes my soul with an auric beat, Love blooms amid a full moon in aquiver heat. When I fall in love, I will bestow my all, It arises during alertness, sleep, or crawl. As an ariose bloom, I am free in her grasp, Time slips in her hold, as love vows a clasp. When I fall in love—I cherish every turn, Under the pretense of perpetual concern. With a look and a grin, you had me awed, Heart fire, in love—descry mist, not flawed As I fell in love—I will miss her as she left, In every departure, my heart grows a cleft. Two souls lost in heavenly love now merge, Love anew, with each dawn submerge.

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Date: 5/10/2024 12:34:00 AM
so pretty and written so well.
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Date: 5/9/2024 11:30:00 PM
You rhyme alwYs so well dr sotto, I absolutely love how you’ve given love a new definition that is so profound and true and soulfully meaningful! This poem made my heart race as i think of my beloved how beautifully youv captured all is what really stands out along with the exquisite diction, metaphor’s imagery and use of alliterative wordplay” When I fall in love—I cherish every turn, Under the pretense of perpetual concern.” I must say me too. Love is to give and share freely! Congratulations
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Date: 5/1/2024 9:10:00 PM
Love is so fulfilling, padding the vacuum within. Love in its profundity renews life and lends it new dimensions. Once in love, parting is painful and leaves a dent in the soul. When two souls are blended in love, it makes heavenly moments. A lovely poem dear friend. "Two souls lost in heavenly love now merge, Love anew, with each dawn submerge." Beautiful Conclusion!
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Date: 4/30/2024 10:44:00 AM
A real love poem. Romantic and beautiful.
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Date: 4/30/2024 9:57:00 AM
This poem beautifully captures the depth and intensity of falling in love, portraying it as a transformative experience that overwhelms the senses and stirs the soul. The imagery of being "drowned with her love" and feeling "pride and bliss from above" sets a tone of profound emotion and enchantment, suggesting that love has the power to elevate and enrich one's existence..
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Date: 4/30/2024 9:31:00 AM
SP, really wonderful description of love and great choice of accompanying music. You're making me smile, sir. I am very lucky to be married to a beautiful person for the past 46 years. These poems make me think about the relationship I have and realize how many different ways there are to think about it all.
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Date: 4/30/2024 5:37:00 AM
A beautiful romantic poem. Exquisite all around. Best for a win.
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Date: 4/29/2024 11:07:00 PM
Refreshingly romantic and hopeful! I love this poem! A fav! Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:42:00 PM
Beautifully romantic poem, my friend. No other feeling touches heart and mind like falling in love--as you have eloquently illustrated, Lasaad.
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:12:00 PM
What an exquisite and captivating love poem, Sotto!! Reading it left me breathless filled with the delight of this masterpiece--a timeless journey of love 'bestowing it all...time slips in her hold, as love vows a clasp. But then she departs...meeting again in heaven.' One of the best romance poems -- stirring is the word I would use to describe. Best wishes with the contest! Your poem should do well. Have a lovely evening, your poetess friend in Texas, Sara
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:03:00 PM
Oh God. I don' t know what is better. Your poem evoques love everywhere, the music is fantastic, but your voice reading the poem is the best. You have an unique way of writing, you have an unique voice to be listen to. As I said to you many times, you are the American García Lorca. Unique to look at. Hugs/María
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Date: 4/29/2024 5:03:00 PM
This is a beautiful love poem.
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Date: 4/29/2024 4:25:00 PM
A wonderful poem filled with love Sotto, imagine the joy of meeting up with the one you love in heaven, something to keep one going when lonesome, left on their ownsome. All the best, Beryl
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Date: 4/29/2024 12:46:00 PM
How romantically beautiful Lasaad! Debx
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