Victoria Anderson-Throop Poet Dodoitsu

Falling From the Wall

FALLING FROM THE WALL

                                              air too rare
                                  tumbled but greeted ground
                                         cracked eggs smiled

                                                imagine
                                       sleeping sweet-- here in
                                              Humpty Dump



V Anderson-Throop  2/9/2014

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Verlena S. Walker February 21, 2014 at 1:50 AM So directly stated in a succinct way that I will say that you know yours emotions and how this accident carried you through the rest of your day... Well done Victoria... Verlena

Leon Enriquez February 9, 2014 at 8:40 PM Dear Victoria: Simple yet profound piece. I think it has many layers in a simple fragment. Very hard to achieve but you captured the moment. Inspiring! Leon

David Williams February 9, 2014 at 11:39 AM Victoria I like this a lot...David