Falling For Beloved

Searching, climbing, striving alone, 
So cold, so dark no color in sight
Trying to attain what is still out of reach
Looking for warmth some color sun light

I finally got back to that place on the hill, 
So calm, so quiet yet still all alone
There as I stood I took in the moment, 
I started looking at all the unknown

To the north only light fading to darkness
A place I had been and never again
To the east, to the west I was slightly impressed, 
Not real, no thrill and a little bit plain

Now to the south there was quite a sight,
Sunny, clear, warm and inviting
Full of color and mystery for making of dreams,
I take the first step, it was so enticing

The ground gave away from under my feet, 
My footing is starting to feel very weak
How can I fight this wanting of flight, 
As I fall down from such a great height?

Now I am falling, I’ve been here before
How far will I go is there an end? 
Will I land hard, will I land softly? 
One never knows, but first must ascend

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/16/2010 5:56:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Curt. If you would like to have more of your poetry read please limit your postings to 3-5 poems per day. In doing this more of your poetry is read and other poets can also have theirs read. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/15/2010 1:02:00 PM
Great poem! I enjoyed every word.
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Date: 4/15/2010 12:30:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... so enjoyed reading your creative write today...luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/15/2010 11:26:00 AM
A nice one!
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