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Falling Foolishly

Running backwards into hindsight. Problem with this, nothing is right. The door is closed and shades are drawn. Possibility of hope is all but gone. The light of day came shining down. She turned my smile up from a frown. Out of the blue, she stopped my tracks. My heart is happy, and that's the facts. The winter winds blow cold as hell. I don't care, I'm under her spell. The ice is melting each time she smiles. This frigid fool is falling for her wiles. I've lived without love long enough. Why? The answer to that is just too tough. Time to be blessed with a heart of gold. To share my life with someone to hold. for at first glance contest. All you hopeless romantic's, relax, :) it's just a poem. :) sorry. Would be very nice though. Peace. :)

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Date: 8/26/2014 12:08:00 PM
Indeed it would be nice !!! I vaguely remember the foolishness of falling... and the mistakes along the way that were appalling... I've had a few skips along the way.. but, alas, it's single I'm bound to stay !!! Wonderfully romantic poem... ahhhhh
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Date: 7/17/2014 9:48:00 PM
A truly fine write!! I have fallen foolishly many times, the trick is to get up and just carry on!! A joyous read my friend!!!
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Date: 7/16/2014 9:16:00 AM
Very romantic, dear Robert.. You never know, my friend.. Could happen any time.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/15/2014 8:19:00 AM
Good one, Robert. Hope it places well. BTW, check your spelling for typos. I think you meant 'wiles' instead of 'whiles'. Cheers, Roy.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/15/2014 10:21:00 AM
Thank for the heads up. It's been awhile since I've dealt with whiles or wiles. :)
Date: 7/11/2014 12:17:00 AM
Dang, I wish it were true for you. YOu did a wonderful job with this entry for the contest, my friend.
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Robert Johnson
Date: 7/11/2014 8:28:00 AM
Meeee Toooo! :) Thanks for being a hopeless romantic. :)

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