Falling Asleep

Bedtime stories rode to magical realms  
night lights turned off her shining smile 
in a blanket of hug and lukewarm kisses, 
a sweet birdsong pulled eyelid curtains
and innocence fell asleep by mummy's side.

Exam time cramming the night before 
a battle of stress to get into college
burning of minds and rustling of books
trying hard not to sleep, scattered revisions
and exertion fell asleep by table-lamp side

Late night thoughts of a special friend
unfolding slowly, inside a dream awake
exciting promise, ablaze heart in journey
draped in rainbow, soaked in jubilant rain
and love fell asleep by a rose-tint bedside
   
A sleepwalking mind in philosophic soul
no more struggle in trying to be someone
a poet in peace building words into dream  
sitting by the shore, seashells of memories
and in lullaby waves, falls asleep by seaside.


29th May, 2020


Sponsor	Kai Michael Neumann
Contest Name	Falling |

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 6/17/2020 2:12:00 AM
Your soothing words brought back my own memories of falling asleep in the serenity of my loved ones. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/16/2020 2:32:00 AM
I can feel the serenity in your thoughts. Congratulations dear poet Debjani. Keep coming!
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Date: 6/15/2020 10:23:00 AM
Nice write Debjani, this time you get some validation, congrats on a nice placement!
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Date: 5/28/2020 2:14:00 PM
Hello Debjani Mitra, in this poem the last verse is the verse I like the best. Enjoy your day my friend.
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