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Falling Around Me

take a step, and i crack, try and run, take it back, in the dark, hear me cry, would you scream, if i die, pity party, all for you, even after, what you put me through....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/23/2012 11:26:00 AM
I am enjoying reading up on all the poetry I can today. I am happy yours was one that I was able to read today. The weekend is here and I must also make time for my family life. I will be back on Monday as usual and I wish you a beautiful weekend filled with renewed inspiration Jezabella. Love, Carol
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