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Falling All Over Each Other

The coats are falling all over each other We have tried to separate them But they like being close and chummy Pickpocketing each other's pockets Rubbing their collars upside Each other's necks Sniffing and snorting Grunting sometimes This is when it is not easy to be a coat check girl

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/27/2019 12:07:00 AM

This is when it is not easy to be a coat check girl///Yeah;

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/27/2019 12:25:00 AM

It is not easy to find a photograph of a coat check girl either. It was impossible!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/25/2019 5:10:00 PM

Love it! I can feel the atmosphere you have described!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/26/2019 4:07:00 AM

I had such a great time writing this one. I thought "are the groans too much?" But NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO not for this randy crowd!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/25/2019 9:32:00 AM

Caren, I can always count on you for an uplifting morning coat or crocodile. Like a shiny new nickel found in the alley of my mind. Have a wonderful day poet. -Richard

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/26/2019 4:07:00 AM

Thank you so much my friend, and fellow poet! I am pleased you like my stuff.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/25/2019 8:42:00 AM

ha! you've painted a very vivid picture, caren! love it!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/25/2019 9:03:00 AM

Thank you Ilene. I thought "do I dare?" and of course Trixie reminded me who we are.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/25/2019 8:24:00 AM

- Just snuggle :))) - hugs cuddle //Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 9/25/2019 9:03:00 AM

I will, I do. We will!