Caren Krutsinger Poet Light Verse

Falling All Over Each Other

The coats are falling all over each other
We have tried to separate them
But they like being close and chummy
Pickpocketing each other's pockets
Rubbing their collars upside
Each other's necks
Sniffing and snorting
Grunting sometimes
This is when it is not easy
to be a coat check girl

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Mahtab Bangalee September 27, 2019 at 12:07 AM This is when it is not easy to be a coat check girl///Yeah; Caren Krutsinger September 27, 2019 at 12:25 AM It is not easy to find a photograph of a coat check girl either. It was impossible!

Kim Rodrigues September 25, 2019 at 5:10 PM Love it! I can feel the atmosphere you have described! Caren Krutsinger September 26, 2019 at 4:07 AM I had such a great time writing this one. I thought "are the groans too much?" But NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO not for this randy crowd!

Quoth Theraven September 25, 2019 at 9:32 AM Caren, I can always count on you for an uplifting morning coat or crocodile. Like a shiny new nickel found in the alley of my mind. Have a wonderful day poet. -Richard Caren Krutsinger September 26, 2019 at 4:07 AM Thank you so much my friend, and fellow poet! I am pleased you like my stuff.

Ilene Bauer September 25, 2019 at 8:42 AM ha! you've painted a very vivid picture, caren! love it! Caren Krutsinger September 25, 2019 at 9:03 AM Thank you Ilene. I thought "do I dare?" and of course Trixie reminded me who we are.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2019 at 8:24 AM - Just snuggle :))) - hugs cuddle //Anne-Lise :) Caren Krutsinger September 25, 2019 at 9:03 AM I will, I do. We will!