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Its like falling off a cliff its like diving in a pool you don't know where you are you don't know where to go You spin round and round until you're about to fall down you hold you breath and close you'r eyes you count to ten and then you fall you fall while the world is spinning so fast you cannot see you open your eyes but the world is gone you look around but no one's there so you hold your breath, close your eyes, and count to ten and then.. you open them and darkness is all around you hear a sound a sound so soft, it takes you a while to realize its your alarm going off.

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