Fallen Tree

Fallen tree

     in forest

as creatures

      gather around

to mourn a friend.



Written 5-27-11
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/2/2011 11:56:00 PM
wow, I really like this one, JAmes. I can just picture the little creatures there in the woods!
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Date: 6/1/2011 4:16:00 PM
a sweet elegy for the tree from the creatures who depend upon it for shelter James.. super sweet luv..
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Date: 5/31/2011 1:09:00 PM
Great symbolism. Nice setting. LOve, daver
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Date: 5/31/2011 3:46:00 AM
Brilliance comes to mind James!!! I love this :)
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James Foulk
Date: 5/31/2011 9:35:00 AM
thank you for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 5/30/2011 7:29:00 PM
you are such a deep thinker, I love what comes out of those thoughts. Jeff
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Date: 5/30/2011 3:25:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this very creative work..The tree will give life to many creatures even in its death...Thanks for the kind review of my work...Sara
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James Foulk
Date: 5/31/2011 9:52:00 AM
Thank you Sara for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 5/30/2011 12:14:00 PM
What a lovely thought, James. Maybe that is why they gather round
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James Foulk
Date: 5/31/2011 9:56:00 AM
thank you Jack for reading and commenting on this poem.
Date: 5/30/2011 11:20:00 AM
Very impressive write my friend
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Date: 5/30/2011 10:54:00 AM
Another excellent write....
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Date: 5/30/2011 9:40:00 AM
brilliant
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