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Written: October 28, 2023, For JCB Brul Contest ________________________________________ With a balmy wind, nature sings its symphony~as leaves dance above. Life's cycle will transcend autumn's saffron tapestry~without dismay Watch fall leaves slip softly~as you admire nature's awe-inspiring grace

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Date: 11/9/2023 7:35:00 AM
A beautiful set of Monoku's you've composed, Lasaad. Your introduced naturing accentuates the cadence exquistedly, my friend. Again, I extend my compliments on your deserving placement. Aloha, William
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Date: 11/8/2023 11:36:00 AM
Dear Sotto your string of monokus are absolutely stunning and so creative! I really love the way this flows in such a mellifluous way with descriptive diction! Especially “ balmy wind” “ nature sings its symphony” “ saffron tapestry” “ fall leaves slip” so gorgeous! Well deserves win really! Congratulations!
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Date: 11/8/2023 8:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely Monoku write/picture. Love It... Enjoy your day/win writing away........
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Date: 10/30/2023 9:01:00 PM
Lovely!
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Date: 10/29/2023 11:33:00 AM
A good set of monokus.
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Date: 10/29/2023 10:16:00 AM
a symphony, saffron tapestry and a cool pic!
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