Fallen Reflections

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Written: October 28, 2023, For JCB Brul Contest ________________________________________ With a balmy wind, nature sings its symphony~as leaves dance above. Life's cycle will transcend autumn's saffron tapestry~without dismay Watch fall leaves slip softly~as you admire nature's awe-inspiring grace

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Hilo Poet

Date: 11/9/2023 7:35:00 AM

A beautiful set of Monoku's you've composed, Lasaad. Your introduced naturing accentuates the cadence exquistedly, my friend. Again, I extend my compliments on your deserving placement. Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 11/8/2023 11:36:00 AM

Dear Sotto your string of monokus are absolutely stunning and so creative! I really love the way this flows in such a mellifluous way with descriptive diction! Especially “ balmy wind” “ nature sings its symphony” “ saffron tapestry” “ fall leaves slip” so gorgeous! Well deserves win really! Congratulations!