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Fallen Leaves

an empty park bench surrounded by fallen leaves ~ bird perches on branch 9-9-2022 Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/20/2022 4:30:00 PM

Back with my congrats, Joseph

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/20/2022 8:36:00 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I wonder who perched on the bench? Your visit to my page added a different dimension. Thanks, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/18/2022 7:08:00 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Joseph! Linda

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/18/2022 6:35:00 AM

Congratulations for your win Joseph. Enjoy :)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 9/18/2022 3:54:00 AM

Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, love the imagery!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/17/2022 7:50:00 PM

"empty park bench" - Great symbol, indeed. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 9/12/2022 6:36:00 AM

Nice imagery ere Joseph! Linda

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/11/2022 9:44:00 AM

I can see it Joseph. I guess the branch is the bird's bench. Well done :)

Brandy Nicole

Date: 9/10/2022 6:41:00 PM

You have painted a beautiful picture with your words. So soothing, yet tender and expressive, all at the same time. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Elizabeth Mccann

Date: 9/10/2022 1:59:00 PM

I love a haiku that's just right! Elizabeth

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2022 2:23:00 AM

A haiku written as the rules dictate. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/9/2022 8:12:00 PM

so sweet, Joseph!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/9/2022 9:15:00 AM

Love the picture you've created Joseph, must add it's my favourite season. Good luck in the contest. Tom