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Fallen Leaves

an empty park bench
 surrounded by fallen leaves ~
  bird perches on branch

 9-9-2022
 Autumn in Nature - Haiku Poetry Contest
 Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

Copyright © Joseph May | Year Posted 2022

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Andrea Dietrich

September 20, 2022 at 4:30 PM

Back with my congrats, Joseph

September 20, 2022 at 8:36 AM

Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. I wonder who perched on the bench? Your visit to my page added a different dimension. Thanks, Sara

Linda Alice Fowler

September 18, 2022 at 7:08 AM

Back with congratulations on your win Joseph! Linda

September 18, 2022 at 6:35 AM

Congratulations for your win Joseph. Enjoy :)

September 18, 2022 at 3:54 AM

Joe, congratulations on your winning placement with your beautiful haiku, love the imagery!

Christuraj Alex

September 17, 2022 at 7:50 PM

"empty park bench" - Great symbol, indeed. Congratulations!

Linda Alice Fowler

September 12, 2022 at 6:36 AM

Nice imagery ere Joseph! Linda

September 11, 2022 at 9:44 AM

I can see it Joseph. I guess the branch is the bird's bench. Well done :)

September 10, 2022 at 6:41 PM

You have painted a beautiful picture with your words. So soothing, yet tender and expressive, all at the same time. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy

Elizabeth Mccann

September 10, 2022 at 1:59 PM

I love a haiku that's just right! Elizabeth

Victor Buhagiar

September 10, 2022 at 2:23 AM

A haiku written as the rules dictate. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

September 9, 2022 at 8:12 PM

so sweet, Joseph!

September 9, 2022 at 9:15 AM

Love the picture you've created Joseph, must add it's my favourite season. Good luck in the contest. Tom

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