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Fallen Friendship

We walk together every day

reminiscing on the daily family occurrence

till one day I tripped and fell.

I dwell discouraged, 

never to have my best friend again


By: Eve Roper 11/30/2015

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Charlotte Puddifoot

December 5, 2015 at 8:54 PM

i really felt this one as i have personal experience of it - it stings! - congrats on your deserved win

Eve Roper

December 18, 2015 at 6:01 PM

Thank you, Charlotte, it does hurt espically if you walked together everyday.

Paul Callus

December 5, 2015 at 3:15 PM

An honest expression of hurt feelings, but I hope that things got better in time (?). Congrats on this fine win, Eve! Regards // paul

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:39 PM

Friendship last forever if you got love in your heart, but the pain doesn't stop it just easies. Ironic after I move across the country she had the same type of surgery for a different illness where it left me with bell's palsy it left her with still a lot of pain.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

December 4, 2015 at 9:38 PM

Wonderful verse n win Eve.. big congrats!

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:41 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma A. Sharma, so much for your constant support.

Skat A

December 4, 2015 at 8:11 PM

Hi Eve, a very nice win. SKAT

Eve Roper

December 5, 2015 at 8:42 PM

Thank you, Skat, always here for me.

Lin Lane

December 4, 2015 at 7:25 PM

awww, Eve...sorry your sister treated you that way... but congrats on this one.

Andrea Dietrich

December 4, 2015 at 7:08 PM

wow, that is really inconsiderate of her. Great job in the contest.

Rob Carmack

December 4, 2015 at 6:35 PM

Nothing like a gauntlet to show you just who your friends really are, or what they really are. Glad you turned the page. Congrats.

Beautiful Scars

December 4, 2015 at 4:40 PM

Here I am! back to congratulate you on your well deserved win! I knew you would win! -lu *smiles*

Nette Onclaud

December 4, 2015 at 4:39 PM

i was there feeling the pain; well done, eve... sweet, fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest..huggs

Jan Allison

December 4, 2015 at 4:26 PM

I'm 100% positive I commented on this and another entry in the contest Eve - so sad when friend let us down and trust is gone:-( congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Beautiful Scars

December 2, 2015 at 2:14 PM

Eve, this is just like you said about my poem the other day, I "turned the page" on my journey through life. Lovely poem here...God bless :)-lu *smiles*