Fallen- Faithful- Forward

fate fractures
family fades
footsteps falter

forsaken
fragile
fearful

yet faith fuels
fortifies
frees

fallen, faithful, forward
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Baker Avatar
August 26, 2025 at 3:26 PM
Nice Alliteration poetry, Rowena. in verse was connected through thought. Smiles ~ Blessings Bill
Maverick Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 10:58 AM
We must persevere in the service of Christ yes A great reminder here."
Hind Avatar
August 24, 2025 at 8:19 PM
This is lovely! I love how you made this.
Velasco Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 2:28 AM
Thank you! I’m so happy you enjoyed it.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
August 23, 2025 at 5:10 PM
a beautiful alliterative poem with a uplifting message. Nicely done, Rowena. I liked: faith fuels, forties, frees.' Faving
Velasco Avatar
August 25, 2025 at 2:27 AM
Thank you so much! I’m really glad that line stood out to you, and I appreciate the fave!
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