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Fallen Contest

Lovely lady was my rock
                                           instant hero from birth
                                        fell into the fire of addiction
                                             love became a curse
                                         suicide breaking our bond
                                       broken loyalty, her pulse,
                                             just couldn't respond

                                              My sister, Karen
                                                    30 words
  
                                           

                                               ~Laura Urbaniak~
                                       ~Fallen 25-30 Words Contest~
                                        ~Date: November 29, 2015~

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Michael Tor Date: 12/4/2015 10:34:00 PM Im so sorry for your loss Laura. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/5/2015 1:31:00 PM Thank you for your kind words Michael...-lu

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 12/4/2015 9:33:00 PM Wonderful write Laura n so is ur win.. big congrats! Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 9:50:00 PM Many thanks :)-lu *smiles*

Skat A Date: 12/4/2015 8:09:00 PM Laura, sweet win--- SKAT Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 9:00:00 PM Thank you SKAT:)

Lin Lane Date: 12/4/2015 7:21:00 PM well done, Laura...congratulations. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 8:16:00 PM Thank you Lin:)-lu

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/4/2015 7:04:00 PM wow, this is really sad. I agree with Rob's comment on those last two lines!!! Congrats for the win. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 8:16:00 PM thank you Andrea very much :)-lu

Rob Carmack Date: 12/4/2015 6:19:00 PM Congrats Laura. Those last two lines kick ass. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 8:15:00 PM Thank you Rob :)-lu

Nette Onclaud Date: 12/4/2015 4:26:00 PM so moved by this sharp write, laura..sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs! Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 4:31:00 PM I owe you a HUGE thank you for considering my poem to be placed in your wonderful contest. THANK you so much...-lu

Jan Allison Date: 12/4/2015 4:14:00 PM oh Laura I am sure I commented on this before - the drugs situation has hit me very hard with our friends 2 sons dying just a year ago:-( many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Jan Allison Date: 12/4/2015 4:33:00 PM The loss of the 2 boys was a tragic accident LU - sadly when you dabble with drugs you don't know what you are taking or its potency - such a heartbreaking situation for those left behind to grieve:-( hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 4:30:00 PM Thank you very much Jan, you really are a sweet woman all the time. Everyone we know knows someone who has taken their own life...Be blessed -lu

John Hamilton Date: 12/4/2015 4:05:00 PM Thanks for posting this, sadly friends and family don't often think about others and how their decisions will affect them, brave write, congrats. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 12/4/2015 4:28:00 PM Thank you John, and no she didn't. But she was always my hero -lu

Eve Roper Date: 12/2/2015 3:54:00 PM So hard to take when you lose one to drugs :( very good write, Laura! Login to Reply Eve Roper Date: 12/3/2015 9:06:00 PM Bless you <3 Beautiful Scars Date: 12/3/2015 7:36:00 PM Thanks again Eve :) Yes it's awful.. Alcohol too..because of her I have not had a drink in 7 years.

Tim Smith Date: 11/29/2015 2:27:00 PM This is so sad Laura. Login to Reply Beautiful Scars Date: 11/29/2015 2:47:00 PM I know, and I wasn't sure if I was going to write about her, but she was my hero up until the day she died...