Beautiful Scars Poet Verse

Fallen Contest

Lovely lady was my rock
                                           instant hero from birth
                                        fell into the fire of addiction
                                             love became a curse
                                         suicide breaking our bond
                                       broken loyalty, her pulse,
                                             just couldn't respond

                                              My sister, Karen
                                                    30 words
  
                                           

                                               ~Laura Urbaniak~
                                       ~Fallen 25-30 Words Contest~
                                        ~Date: November 29, 2015~

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Michael Tor December 4, 2015 at 10:34 PM Im so sorry for your loss Laura. Beautiful Scars December 5, 2015 at 1:31 PM Thank you for your kind words Michael...-lu

Dr. Upma A. Sharma December 4, 2015 at 9:33 PM Wonderful write Laura n so is ur win.. big congrats! Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 9:50 PM Many thanks :)-lu *smiles*

Skat A December 4, 2015 at 8:09 PM Laura, sweet win--- SKAT Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 9:00 PM Thank you SKAT:)

Lin Lane December 4, 2015 at 7:21 PM well done, Laura...congratulations. Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 8:16 PM Thank you Lin:)-lu

Andrea Dietrich December 4, 2015 at 7:04 PM wow, this is really sad. I agree with Rob's comment on those last two lines!!! Congrats for the win. Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 8:16 PM thank you Andrea very much :)-lu

Rob Carmack December 4, 2015 at 6:19 PM Congrats Laura. Those last two lines kick ass. Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 8:15 PM Thank you Rob :)-lu

Nette Onclaud December 4, 2015 at 4:26 PM so moved by this sharp write, laura..sweet fine congrats and thank you for gracing my contest.. huggs! Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 4:31 PM I owe you a HUGE thank you for considering my poem to be placed in your wonderful contest. THANK you so much...-lu

Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 4:14 PM oh Laura I am sure I commented on this before - the drugs situation has hit me very hard with our friends 2 sons dying just a year ago:-( many congrats on your win :-) hugs Jan xx Jan Allison December 4, 2015 at 4:33 PM The loss of the 2 boys was a tragic accident LU - sadly when you dabble with drugs you don't know what you are taking or its potency - such a heartbreaking situation for those left behind to grieve:-( hugs Jan xx Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 4:30 PM Thank you very much Jan, you really are a sweet woman all the time. Everyone we know knows someone who has taken their own life...Be blessed -lu

John Hamilton December 4, 2015 at 4:05 PM Thanks for posting this, sadly friends and family don't often think about others and how their decisions will affect them, brave write, congrats. Beautiful Scars December 4, 2015 at 4:28 PM Thank you John, and no she didn't. But she was always my hero -lu

Eve Roper December 2, 2015 at 3:54 PM So hard to take when you lose one to drugs :( very good write, Laura! Eve Roper December 3, 2015 at 9:06 PM Bless you <3 Beautiful Scars December 3, 2015 at 7:36 PM Thanks again Eve :) Yes it's awful.. Alcohol too..because of her I have not had a drink in 7 years.

Tim Smith November 29, 2015 at 2:27 PM This is so sad Laura. Beautiful Scars November 29, 2015 at 2:47 PM I know, and I wasn't sure if I was going to write about her, but she was my hero up until the day she died...