Fallen Apart With Roses In My Heart

i'm falling apart with the roses in my heart
stuck and so far clutched and i cannot cry
so the only feeling you have left to tell me
what you have left to tell me have yet to fly

so the reason you lie to me still stays away
i'm farther from you but you're not closer
so are we in this or not because i feel the malice
the thorn of that rose pinches my throat 

so tell me how the staircase flew off the floor
now tell me the next meaning of life
you're telling me to stay away from you
but you never told me the difference between wrong and right

so mend this current and tear my face off
strap the limbs around my throat and neck
and just lie to me saying i'll be okay
because this life brought down the hell

so take the sun and the earth and moon
and destroy me and because i'm the only remainder

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/14/2010 1:47:00 PM
You've done a good job getting it all out now stop giving away all of you and keep some..find someone you nurishes you...everyone deserves this. Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2010 6:14:00 PM
this is so out there, enjoyed and the end is the best part, nicely done,..p.d.
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